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for Unspoken

by Elynia

person maxwell16
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*looks to the floor* i'm sorry but i love you for keeping joey alive *big hug* and your story rules keep it up lol
person ravens_spacemonkey
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO, DONT END THERE, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person saphii
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-__- nice twist ....update soon.
person k
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't suck at all. In fact, it's a really good start to a promising story, & well - written. Just keep up the good work!
person maxwell16
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink blink* *stands up and picks up a very sharp knife and gose to find Elynia* WHAT ARE YOU DOING KILLING JOEY .....WHY .....I HATE YOU *runs of crying*
person catti-dono
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are sooo devious...I like it...laughs...keep up the evilness...catti
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's soo evil. Really great. I hope you keep writing.
person saphii
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor yugi. nice chapter though.
person saphii
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yep soo mean. Y__Y but it's still good. gah! update soon! i wanna know what happens! T_T
person saphii
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO omg! joey!!!!!!!!!!!!!! noooo!!!!!!!!!!! T________________T