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O.o? huh? mokuba? gah1 i'm confused!!!! T___T

eeeep!!!!!!!!! OO update soon! i must know what happens now! jee, you made the tristan/mokuba thing really good. x.x

WHOA!!! THAT IS AWAY TENSE PLEA|E DON'T KJILL ANYONE!! (except Duke)

NOOO! Hurry and update. WHAT HAPPENS!!!! TELL ME!!! Very good though, i was at the edge of my seat.

RD: WHAT WHY THAT TWO TIMING LIL BRAT after Joey risked his LIFE HIS FUCKING GOD DAM LIFE FOR MOKUBA in the vertual reality world THIS IS THE THANKS HE GETS *slams Mokuba into a wall and ties him down* you lucky kid that i wont lay a finger to harm children i'll leave that to Seto how could you do that to him if had simply TOLD your brother how you felt I know dam well joey would have done all he could to make you happy cause he knows what its like to have a younger sibline BRAT grr i swear to god duke if you hurt yugi your dead do you hear me DEAD huh ok im calm and relaxed now keep up the great work and update soon ive got a dice freak to slaughter JA NE

awww. poor joey and yugi. T_T seto and yami better get off their asses soon! >_>

Duke is mad, crazy & deranged. He's not even trying to hide his identity. Surely, he can't expect to get away with this. When this is over, he's going to have to pay, big - time. If the law cannot, for whatever reason, do anything, then I'm sure that Seto & Yami can come up with some kind of fitting retribution!

RD:*the entire sky becomes filled with dark sinister clouds while beneath the raging sky my entire body pulses with red fiery rage then in an explosive roar of agonized rage tears through the night grabs Duke by his hair then chains him to a crain that slowly drops him closer to a pit of molten lava with the gas and intense heat his entire body starts to heat up more and more and the closer he got the more hotter it got then she flies up into the sky and with a massive wave of power that almost looks like a Kamakazi move a blood red dome of power appears and causes all of earths lava to burst forth melting Duke as he screams then a fist appears in the lava caring a revived but still badly hurt duke she takes him then changes her form to a ice blue and then takes him to a air tight solid diamond room throws him in then locks its tight then pulls a switch and fifty thousand tons of dried ice falls on duke burning his skin and filling it with carbon dioxide poisoning him then turns off the switch and reverts the temp to melt the ice and turns on a vent to get rid of the dangerous air then drags him out revived but still in pain from the last two tortures her scales turn a deep earthy brown and drags him into the earth going deeper and and deeper till the pressure is to greath and destroys him she revives him then leaves her scales turn aquamarine and she dives into the ocean going into the deepest parts of it and has shark after shark tear him to pieces then revives and turns deep forest green has vines hold him and has him consume the most toxic of plants and poisons and has swarms of bugs and plagues haunt him till hes a hanging wrotting corpse then as her final torture turns deep black grabs his soul and tears it to shreds then takes him to outer space and flings him as hard as she can into the sun to destroy him for good* huh well that was fun keep up the great work and update soon and if that was a bit graphic and long sry but duke has earned it and will keep doing this till that crazy fuck lets yugi and joey go till then ill be taking leafs out of Moses's book but adding some twists to it and show him MY wonders gtg now JA NE keep up the great work and update soon

please come back and finish the storie this chapter was to sad to just finish it like this please come come back T.T

RD: well still im going to murder Tristan and Duke in just a few seconds *grabs duke by his puny ponytail and drags him over to tristans house then grabs him and takes them both to her castle to the Extreame Torture Chamber slams them bothe in to a wall so cold its practically burning the skin even through clothes then magical chains come forth and with spiked cuffs that dig into there very skin making it very painful then starts playing the song Meaning of Life by Disturbed then starts the dance of the demons releasing her dark nature till what stands b4 duke and tristan is a full fledged demon ready to spill ever ounce of blood they have and she does so like a boat filled with holes she has the entire chamber drenched in there blood enough to satisfy a legion of vamps (Warning the next part of this torture will be highly graphic be adviced to skip it if u cant take ^_~ ty) keeping them fully alive and well to feel eveyr ounce of the torture she then sends pure fear running down there minds still they crack she then places a very lethal poison directly into there beating hearts causing them pain with ever beat then sends electrical shocks of up to 500,000 volts of electicity flowing through there minds and directly into there spines causing enormous amounts of pain then with a single dager creates paper thin cuts and drenches them in salt then makes a deep cut going straight to the bone of each rib and drenches that in salt to make it all the more painful then ataches a mouth mask to shove molten magma nd pure raw acid down there throats to destroy all but there brains hearts and spines witch are stil being given immense pain then to take a small leaf out of the story Anchor to My Insanity *grabs her scimitar cuts off there retored feet(along with every thing else for i place a recovery stone in them to keep them alive till im done) then hands grabs a dager and punctures there eyes out puting them into there mouths then douses them in heavy amounts of raw alchohol and gasoline then after going behind a protection barrier sets them on fire then restores them and brings out a barrel filled with scarabs (like the ones from the mummy) and has them fully devoured by the scarabs then brings them back and charges up her powers to full maximum then ignites it out in a massive explosion that miraculously takes out only tristan and duke were it should have taken out half the planet letting them feel as there entire body is burned to a sinder by the power blast till there nothing but piles of ash then brings them back one last time and puts two gack guns and point blank range and lets the entire thing loose till theres no more bullets for there all completly inside tristan and duke leaving none left finally she uses a dark sinister spell of necromancy and reduces them to mindless undead slaves and sends them to please Kaiba and Yami *well im done for now keep up the great work though im still unhappy bout this but as u can see im taking it as well as i can w/o hurting ur feelings ^__^ the boys dont count they dont have feelings there mindless fuckterds who need to be punished dont u think well gtg now JA NE and update soon please id like to continue my torture session