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for Brotherly Love

by NihilEtNemo

schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*is in love with your original ideas and hot smut*
person You fail.
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you watch any part of season three? Specifically, the episode in which Seto (Or a virtual representation of himself) smacked Mokuba hard enough to send him a good distance across the room, and make the poor kid fall on his ass.

Consdering Mokuba's not much older than he is on the show, I have a hard time seeing him go up and say "Heyy Big bro, I want to rape you, so let me slap on a collar and let's fuck because I say so!"

I also can't believe Seto turns into a love slave uke from non-consensual sex, either. Yes, that's what it is. More likely, he'd throw Mokuba in therapy with the best shrinks money can buy if he started acting like that.

Seriously, this fic sucks big time.
person mercynre
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uke Seto is just the super-hawtness... I love how you always manage to pull it off, it's hard for most writers to capture him in a submissive manner without doing it the wrong way. Always love reading your stories!
person Yaoifanboy
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! DONT TELL ME THATS A ONE SHOT!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I MUST SEE MORE NOA/MOKUBA/SETO SMUT!!!!!!

GREAT story!!!! I loved it so much!