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for If It Takes Forever, I Will Find You

by Rroselavy

person catti-dono
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah...the smut was great...so was the sex...the shower scene....laughs....epilogue? catti
person Sammei
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, so cute! And you're right; you, a lemon? How could I have even thought that? ;D This was a very very sweet chapter, I really liked it. Also, what a perfect setting for Seto to finally pop the question. It just seems right.
Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting the epilogue! Great job, once again!
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: Hope Jou says yes!!!!

Iva: Me too.... they make such a good couple... ^_^; who knew yaoi could catch on so fast to the girls at school? My friend drew this amazing pic of Jou while he was standing on the balcony...it done from a part of your story.... I fell in love with it.... *sighs* Your doing a good job with this keep up the good work kid.

Midnight: -.- once again I have nothing to say.... >.< if Iva calls some one esle a kid I swear!!!

Iva: *smirks*
person catti-dono
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kami that was good.....you get better and better....cannot wait to see what else is in that deviously wonderful mind of yours...laughs...you know after I sent that I thought about it and your right, blonde (female.) blond (male)....slap my forehead and call me doofus...laughs...catti
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: ;___; that was amazing.... *cries*

Iva: *hands Midnight a tissue* I agree.... everyone at her school agreed with this also. ^__^; the girls loved it.....they didn't know who Jou and Seto were so Midnight told them and now thier SetoxJou fans! It's true... your such a good writter keep up the good work.

Midnight: W-what am I suppose to say now?

Iva: Too mad Middi...

Midnight: >< don't eva call me that *tackles Iva*

Iva: @____________@

Midnight: haha! *holds up V sgin* UPDATE SOON PLEASE?!
person Sammei
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great job! I tell you what, you really had me fooled with the whole dream sequence. I was so sad at what dream!Jou was saying! But thank goodness it was a dream. Even though it turned out that Jou was the one to wake Seto up.. so sweet. I'm glad things are finally better now!
I can't wait to see what the last chapter is about. A lemon between Seto and Jou (:crosses fingers:) or what happens when Jou's reunited with everyone else, or a combo of both?
Eagerly awaiting the next update!
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's was good. It made me cried but i like that. I like to read stories i can react to. so u'r doing an amazing job...More please
person Celestial Angel
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* how sad! It was so.. suspenseful!*faints* *wakes up * OMG! I was like at the edge of my seat! It thought it would be some middle aged old pot belled man that Seto saw! *exhales stale air* whew! Oh please, Oh please, update soon! I love YYOOOUU!!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh me likey...gimme more....please?
person tash922
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again, jou ran again....when will this guy realize that kiaba never gives up