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schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story! I love the characters of Mokuba and Rebecca, particularly as a couple. This is one of the best fanfics that I have read on this couple. Please update it soon if you can. :)
person Moi
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story!!! keep writing please!
person LOL
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, that scene where Kaiba asks Mokuba about protection was too funny! Although, I don't think Kaiba would be so pissed about Mokuba having a sex life as long as he *was* being careful and only doing it with one girl ^_^

Fun story. :)
person James
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great so far
person kaibas_baby
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought you werent going to upload the next chapter cause you didnt want me to read it. you know there has been one event in each of your chapters or one phrase that is said that i just think is hilarious. like when she thought his member wouldnt fit and then they were getting freaky on a chair. in this one i think the most hilarious thing is when rebecca was saying that mokuba was a good lover and it was probably cause the size of his member, man i nearly fell out of my chair laughing. i know you are probably hating me at this moment but oh well its just funny. lets see what else did i think was funny, oh, when mokuba said he wants to make love to her for hours and in different positions. u know you surprise me even more with every chapter. ok well i guess ill ttyl ok. and if i think of anything else to review about ill review again ok. ror. love and peace, honey and lemons, steak and tequilla, and of course spice and chocolate. love peace chicken grease. and if any other people are reading this review me and her are good friends so im able to make fun of her and those weird pairings of foods and drinks those are also inside jokes between us so dont even try and figure out what im saying ok.
person dan2000
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done. most fics are about sex but you are more the romantic type. keep it up, there r not many people that write romantic stories.
person kaibas_baby
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry i just had to leave another review. i wanted to put something in my first review but i forgot to put it. it was funny in chapter 2 when she saw how big his member was and she didnt think it would fit, man i thought that was funny. you know what i just realized is that when i write reviews to you its like im writing an e-mail to you, its quite funny. i wonder if you have any other stories that you have written that i havent read yet, since you dont tell me when you write these stories i think im just going to have to look for them. but like i said in my first review it was a good story and i cant wait till its updated. haha. ok well bye. love and peace, honey and lemons, steak and tequilla, and of course spice and chocolate. love peace chicken grease. and for those of you who read reviews me and her are best friends and some of the weird things that i am saying are inside jokes between us, so dont even try and figure out what im saying.ok.
person kaibas_baby
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow who knew you would write a naughtier fic than your joey and mai one. i am shocked and impressed at the same time. i just though it was funny that you were begging me to not read it.hahaha. but i did think it was a good story. but it i ever find out that you write a fic like this about kaiba and some girl i will drive to your house and kill you. ok. but wow i cant believe you had them do it in a chair, that one caught me off guard. if you have any more fics like this you better believe that i will find them so dont even try and hide them. well ill go back to IM you now ok. hahaha its just so funny how you keep on saying that you never intended me to read it. hahaha. ok bye now
person loopy lou
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyyyy i loved this fic..... there arnt any other mokuba/ female fics out there ( that i know of ) and mokuba is one of my favourate, thaxxx
more ppl should write fics with him in, its unfair : (
person Stephena
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it u need 2 write more i loved it