rate_review Reviews

I have been reading your fictions for a while now and I must say I like them. This has to be one of the single most powerful fics I have ever read. I believe it is the only one that has ever made me cry. I didn't like much of the scenario but it was written really well and I give you perks for that. I loved the fic, even though it hurt to see my beloved Seto kaiba go through that. Honestly the reason I decided to review is because of scenarios going through my head on how to get him out of it. It's been bothering me since I first read it. That shows alot of power in the story. I wonder if maybe you would write a sequel to this, even if it doesn't need one? Anyway beautiful writing and profound story. All together I give it a high scoring of about 9/10

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BloodyKaiba

ohh my goddd i read your fic and i just HAD to review. it actually made me cry, the part about the letter....that was just so heartbreaking.
...I honestly have nothing to say except just how devestatingly beautiful that was...
*sniffle*

wow excellent fic...id b lying if i said i didnt shed a tear through it *sniff sniff*

... *sniff* This is the first fic in a long time, I think, that's made my lip quiver uncontrollably and tears run down my cheeks. They say the ones that cry over such drama are crazy. Man, I feel happy and sad at the same time.

Chapter 1 has really gotten me curious! I can't wait to read the rest!

Good fic! I actually cried, though. That was weird. o_o;
I love what you write!

I cried. I really did. Of all the fics I have ever read this one mad me cry so horribly. Heck I am still crying. God I wish he had found him and somehow got him back but eh... life ain't perfect. You wrote it so well and it was absolutely wonderful. Keep writing and this sci-fi twist was great as well. You earned a new faithful fan.

Ansar.

No problem, I'm really enjoying your story and I'm going to try to get the word out... anyway, on to my review. There were a few parts I absolutely loved... "'How old are you? Twelve?'" -- Dunno why, just made me laugh really hard... kawaii I guess ^^; And then there was "...the insanely expensive watch Seto wore..." Heh.. great description... in fact, you have marvelous description throughout your story. Okay. Reading your story has seriously put me behind at work now, but that just means it must be /really/ good... can't wait for the next update. Ja! ~LG

You know, I may have said it before, but I had my doubts about this story at first. Now I'm SO glad I gave it a chance, it's one of the best pieces I've ever read... The characters have depth, the idea behind the story is well thought out and developing nicely, and I can't wait for another update. Thanks for a good read! Ja ne! ~LG

Definatly your best work! I voted for you on the lair, and congratulations on a well deserved win :)