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for Right in Front of Your Face

by Dillusional

schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I hope you keep writing, because it's really starting off good. Iwonder, what Bakura is up to. Please update soon.
person Witchy Willow
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, evil cliffhanger. Great start and you've kept everyone in character.
Yay! I loved the abrupt confession - now that's bold! I have to see what's
next.
person Draza
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, for once i'm gonna say this...*takes a deep breath* FUCKINGKAIBAWHOTHEHELLDOESHETHINKHEISIFYAMIGETSHURTI'MCOMINGAFTERHIMWITHAPITCHFORKANDABLOODYKNIFESOHISBLOODGETSCONTAMINATEDFROMMTHATBLOODYKNIFE!!!!!!!!!!*GASPS*
person saphii
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh good story!!! me likey a lot!!!! we should have like alerts here or something O.o this way i can keep track of these good stories! T_T
person Nancy
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
I've never read any of your stuff before, but this story is good so far! Kaibas a bastard huh?