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for Ahmose Inarus

by hatochiisai

person Feylin
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this
i usually dont read OC but i read alot of your other fics and i now like your character
umm i take it, it has been a while seens you up dated this but are you going to continue it?
it is really good
i hope you finish it
please
person Drago
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go vingfull Yami!
person BJSU
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi wellcome back i hope yoou had a nisce christmas i hope you had a nice vaction and could relax and get ready for the new year. I loved this storie reeal touching . I will give some advise though as a freind pleasse don't take this by critizeing . but i you ccan find time at least once amounth too awsner or aat least write thankk you to your readers on the board like some of the other authrs doo it might encaurage people to review. if you exnolage them some times see ya.
person YamiKitsune
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe ^-^ you already know what I think of this fic. I love it, Ahmose has become one of my favorite OC's I can't wait to read the one about his Hikari. (Mikado....did I spell it right? I think I did, or got close to it I don't remember if it's an o or a u at the end.) anyway! ^-^ I love it, I love Bakura (can't remember how to spell his Egiptian name) Anyway, good luck with the rest of this fic, the sequle, and MB. I can't wait to read the updates. Ja ne!
person Yami's princess
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories i just cought up with them I hope you finish it
person BJSU
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was real good , i hope you decccid e to still do the millium balance
person bjsu
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya I wass waiting for this part poor Amhose . but i can
t wait until they caatch Bakura and maaarik . and are going to confront Sethos
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ahmose. ::sniff::
person Bjsu
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Ahmose he sounds reeeal cool . and a neat person i think you created a good side charactor.
person bjsu
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey whats up this was a good storie and I loved the others sorry i didn't review sooner , i was planning my holloween costume. I see you gave yami yugi his phoronic name Atemu cool . i was wondering if you where going to do that . i hhope you up date soon. bye.