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for Kioku

by Naye025

person silverfox
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying this so keep up the good work and update soon
person Missa
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in giddy mode. Katsu-chan... I'll cease giggling eventually. That's an accomplishment. Someone who loves angst doesn't freely giggle childishly because of a cute nickname. Actually, it was probably because of OOC Seto... I like him bi polar. He hates Jou, he loves him. Such a good actor and deceiver. I love deceivers. And I wonder how Jou will get use to and eventualy love Kaiba. Kaiba seems to freak Jou out, and for good reason.
person Mantha Kaiba
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going...this is sooo sad and soooo sweet so far....poor Seto, Poor Joey, Poor Mokuba....*sniff sniff* Please update soon xxxxx
person Kasik
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First let me tell you just reading that one chapter almost had me in tears, which is saying something because I never cry; and I really mean never. Also I have never really liked stories that started off with either Seto or Jou dying, but I think this one time I'll make an exception; although theres still a chance you could write it like Seto's body was never found and he just lost his memories or something, but it is your story, so don't take my advice!!!