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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story has been quite a ride! I don't think I've ever come across such a *believable* combination of kink and tenderness.
Four years, eh? How many Savage Love columns have you read during that time? cause the key to this chapter (and the story as a whole) seems to me to be the line "Don't apologize for something we both enjoy." - A line that also sums up a lot of Dan's sex advice. (This story also suddenly and inexplicably reminds me of what I've read about the movie "Secretary.")
Four years, eh? How many Savage Love columns have you read during that time? cause the key to this chapter (and the story as a whole) seems to me to be the line "Don't apologize for something we both enjoy." - A line that also sums up a lot of Dan's sex advice. (This story also suddenly and inexplicably reminds me of what I've read about the movie "Secretary.")
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Staring at the cherry surface, he noticed little crescent marks in the glossy finish from his fingernails. He wondered idly if they were from this time or the last time. He didn’t remember making them this time."
That pretty much says "I'm one m*f*cking wordsmith" to me! The Hunger and Thirst series are two of my favorite works on all AFF. You did a really great job with it and I agree with your final notes - the ending you came up with inn the end really work best!
You're an awesome writer.
Milly
That pretty much says "I'm one m*f*cking wordsmith" to me! The Hunger and Thirst series are two of my favorite works on all AFF. You did a really great job with it and I agree with your final notes - the ending you came up with inn the end really work best!
You're an awesome writer.
Milly
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ykarzel,
Let me tell, you are the bestt of both worlds; a very talented author combined with a talented smut author. -Ess. You write those characters so well. I love Seto's motivation and am highly anticipating how you will further Jou's character development as well!
Keep writing this awesome story - may your muse be blessed!
Milly
Let me tell, you are the bestt of both worlds; a very talented author combined with a talented smut author. -Ess. You write those characters so well. I love Seto's motivation and am highly anticipating how you will further Jou's character development as well!
Keep writing this awesome story - may your muse be blessed!
Milly
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so fuckin hot!! My favourite chapter so far was chapter 5....that part where he stepped on jou's hands was HOT...and the part in the 7th where he almost fucked him but didnt......that was amazing!! Please continue....loved it.....when Seto finally does fuck him, I hope you're gonna make it so it's forced and brutal though jou loves it ^_^ Awesome story....keep it up....is there any way you could tell me when you update?
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This.
Don't stop.
I have nothing negative to say and so much positive I'm sure this little review box would explode before I finished.
Don't stop.
I have nothing negative to say and so much positive I'm sure this little review box would explode before I finished.
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I haven't read this story (or Hunger) in years and years, but suddenly remembered it today! What a treat it was to revisit my favorite Seto/Jou porn.
Don't think I ever reviewed anything back then, so let this count for all those years ago. I still love all your stories, your writing style, pretty much everything! Thanks for putting a smile on my face! :D
Don't think I ever reviewed anything back then, so let this count for all those years ago. I still love all your stories, your writing style, pretty much everything! Thanks for putting a smile on my face! :D
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...um what to say...this was awesome. I think the whole strangeness of the chapter really fit with the whole strangeness of the relationship between Seto and Jou. The whole flow of the chapter really showed just how lost Seto was with Jou yet it showed how lost the blond is in everything. This was, i have to say, one of your best chapters. Happy writing!
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had to re-read "Hunger" before going on with "Thirst", hence the late review.
Please know that I ADORE your story, more than just a little.
I love how Joey needs the kinky stuff, needs the humiliation, but can switch back to normal in just a moment. It's not something he needs all the time, but every now and then he REALLY needs it.
Thx for the updates! ^_^x
~jea
Please know that I ADORE your story, more than just a little.
I love how Joey needs the kinky stuff, needs the humiliation, but can switch back to normal in just a moment. It's not something he needs all the time, but every now and then he REALLY needs it.
Thx for the updates! ^_^x
~jea
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter better than the last one it was back to fluffy. I really like how you are developing Seto and Jou's relationship. It is kind of fun to see something different. Their relationship is based on sex that they avoid talking about. Another great story. Keep up the good work
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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your stories though I must say that chapter five was sad for both boys. Kaiba most likely feels like he is being used by Jou just to satisfy his hunger. Yet Jou feels he is being used by Kaiba. I liked chapter four it was fluffy. I'm happy you are back!