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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is geting good keep up the good work . I hope the others fidn thooughtss jerks and givve them what they desserve
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I better not talk too much because I'm about ready to go on a bloody rampage...!
Anyway, it was a damn good chapter, BESIDES the fact that you tortured Ryou... >_< *grrrrrrrrrr*
Well, I can't wait to see the next chapter. *hugs authoress but is still pissed off*
Oh, and try to make sure that Ryou is still alive in the next Update.
Also, can you please kill those sons of bitchs, because I'm already envisioning that Beautiful image in my head.
Shadow Raven
P.S. I'll review more if Ryou is still alive.
Anyway, it was a damn good chapter, BESIDES the fact that you tortured Ryou... >_< *grrrrrrrrrr*
Well, I can't wait to see the next chapter. *hugs authoress but is still pissed off*
Oh, and try to make sure that Ryou is still alive in the next Update.
Also, can you please kill those sons of bitchs, because I'm already envisioning that Beautiful image in my head.
Shadow Raven
P.S. I'll review more if Ryou is still alive.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tell Seto Ryou! You know both of them tell Seto!! Baka!!!
Mou, Ryous can be so stubbourn.
Great chappy! I really lovies it!!
Mou, Ryous can be so stubbourn.
Great chappy! I really lovies it!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Ryou being so Stubborn?!? *banging head againest the wall in frustration*
God I'm about ready to pound some sense into that boy...
I wish Ryou would just tell Seto what's going on, and make everything a lot easier.
Well THANKS for the quick update. *glomps everyone*
And I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^__^
Shadow Raven
P.S. My Writing SUCKS.
God I'm about ready to pound some sense into that boy...
I wish Ryou would just tell Seto what's going on, and make everything a lot easier.
Well THANKS for the quick update. *glomps everyone*
And I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^__^
Shadow Raven
P.S. My Writing SUCKS.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked this i hope they get the bad guys soon . seto and ryou are cute too gether . please up date soon . I never thought yami woould whine over candy
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THOSE ASSHOLES!!!!!!!!!!!!
THOSE STUPID FUCKING ASSHOLES!!!
THEY ARE GOING TO FURKING DDDDIIIIEEEEEE!!!
Bakura should carve them up, eat them skin as a delicacy and then hang from the highest tree by their intestines and leave them to ROT!!
Ummmm... Sorry about my little rage episode, I can't help when a political piece of shit is trying to hurt Ryou or Mokuba just because he wants to marry his ditzy daughters off, it pisses me off.
Nobody, should ever hurt those two cuties, never, never, never...
Anyway, this story ROCKS. ^__^ *bows to authoresses*
And I can't wait to see the next Update. Please Hurry.
Shadow Raven
P.S. Please, make sure Bakura and Marik torture those Sons of Bitches. Pretty Please. *bats puppy dog eyes* ^.^
And please excuse my French.
THOSE STUPID FUCKING ASSHOLES!!!
THEY ARE GOING TO FURKING DDDDIIIIEEEEEE!!!
Bakura should carve them up, eat them skin as a delicacy and then hang from the highest tree by their intestines and leave them to ROT!!
Ummmm... Sorry about my little rage episode, I can't help when a political piece of shit is trying to hurt Ryou or Mokuba just because he wants to marry his ditzy daughters off, it pisses me off.
Nobody, should ever hurt those two cuties, never, never, never...
Anyway, this story ROCKS. ^__^ *bows to authoresses*
And I can't wait to see the next Update. Please Hurry.
Shadow Raven
P.S. Please, make sure Bakura and Marik torture those Sons of Bitches. Pretty Please. *bats puppy dog eyes* ^.^
And please excuse my French.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry if I have not review and I have been reading this story for a while and I love it
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're right. It does deserve more reviews. So here's my review, UPDATE, DAMMIT!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it please continue love ur stories especially Tearing Down the Sky
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems ive missed a few chapters.
Oh my. The Marik/Bakura/Malik lemon was so great!^^ On so many levels too. I loved the heat but also the connection and love for each other the whole time. Bakura let Marik dominate him completely and.. it was just so good! *sniffles* THEY ALL LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH!
ahem.. *blush* well come on! Who doesnt love a lemon which is so so steamy and yet so lovey ^^
Did i mention i loved the lemon in chapter seven? I really loved it!
Anyways. OTHER than the lemon lol
LMFAO @ the pond thing. dfl @ Marik poking Bakura with a stick so he couldnt get out. Oh god, so hilarious.
*giggles at Bakura and Marik elbow nudging contest* Lol. I love those guys.
*nervous* No they cant hurt him again! PROMISE they wont hurt Ryou again.. if they are going to I DEMAND A WARNING *pout* i dont like it when he gets hurt. Mokuba too. Dont hurted heem.. hes so.. little and.. innocent *sulk*
*sigh* Dont hurt anyone cept the evil guys.. they can fucking ROTT! *mumbles*
Seto will work it out before they get anywhere near Ryou again.
Im thinking that whole video idea was really fucking stupid. Because, i mean, now they have the PROOF that Ryou was drugged and therefore not actually begging for it... (because he was drugged) if they released the video it would just be.. 'those are the rapists'.. its pracially evidence against them now. Idiots. Unless, of course, theres going to be some crazy plot twist.. damnit! *so nervous*
PLEASE update soon okays! ^-^ Love it!
Oh my. The Marik/Bakura/Malik lemon was so great!^^ On so many levels too. I loved the heat but also the connection and love for each other the whole time. Bakura let Marik dominate him completely and.. it was just so good! *sniffles* THEY ALL LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH!
ahem.. *blush* well come on! Who doesnt love a lemon which is so so steamy and yet so lovey ^^
Did i mention i loved the lemon in chapter seven? I really loved it!
Anyways. OTHER than the lemon lol
LMFAO @ the pond thing. dfl @ Marik poking Bakura with a stick so he couldnt get out. Oh god, so hilarious.
*giggles at Bakura and Marik elbow nudging contest* Lol. I love those guys.
*nervous* No they cant hurt him again! PROMISE they wont hurt Ryou again.. if they are going to I DEMAND A WARNING *pout* i dont like it when he gets hurt. Mokuba too. Dont hurted heem.. hes so.. little and.. innocent *sulk*
*sigh* Dont hurt anyone cept the evil guys.. they can fucking ROTT! *mumbles*
Seto will work it out before they get anywhere near Ryou again.
Im thinking that whole video idea was really fucking stupid. Because, i mean, now they have the PROOF that Ryou was drugged and therefore not actually begging for it... (because he was drugged) if they released the video it would just be.. 'those are the rapists'.. its pracially evidence against them now. Idiots. Unless, of course, theres going to be some crazy plot twist.. damnit! *so nervous*
PLEASE update soon okays! ^-^ Love it!