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for My Forever

by hatochiisai

schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Standing ovation* Sweet and sour rolled into one. I don't think i've ever seen seto cry so much ^_^ The angst...painful. The lemons...tangy! LOVE YOU!!
person Shadow Mistress on MM.org
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was such a lovely ending! Beautifully romantic and of course a hot and loving lemon. ^^ Such an awesome story. I really enjoyed it and I loved how the ending was all perfectly planned; their evening was just magical! Ryou -is- cute as you described. Lovely descriptions by the way. And you know what, I had "Violin Romance" by Beethoven playing in the background, which seemed to suit it very nicely. ^_^

I didn't realize you had the ending posted, therefore my late review. But anyways, a well done story on both of your parts. ^^ See ya around. ^_~
person Feylin
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is people like you two who give fan girls the perverted reputation that is so rightfully deserved.
i love your fic i am still reading it just finished chapter 20
bloody brillant
i love it
it is very distracting
must not read anymore untill final paper is finished
person Feylin
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic i am on like chapter 7 and i have to say the bakura malik marik lovey dovey sence was so great
also this is the funniest fic i have ever read
thankyou i am going to keep reading but i just had to tell you two that i love it
person M.E
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wholy shit.... I can't believe you finished it. I'm sad that its finished but I'm happy. Ahhh.. I loved that story.
person M.E
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! the wedding was so sweet! please update A.S.A.P please... I'll love you for ever!
person Tenshi
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The end was so sweet - funny too. Yay for happiness and Ryou's dad being so understanding!
person M.E
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! I've been waiting for this since before the move. Thank you. and please let it have a good ending.. or i'll cry... again. yay!
person Shadow Mistress or KuraMagicianGirl on mm.org
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, ch18 was pure torture! That was pure evil!!! Those fuckin bastards will pay!!! DIE!!!

Poor Ryou, he doesn't deserve any of this. Poor Mokuba and Bakura and Seto too. *huggles* I do hope they'll be saved in the next ch and that Ryou'll be both mentally and physically ok in the end. But nevertheless, an awesome story, and I can't wait til you update and when those sonabitches gets their share of torture! Bwahahahahaha!
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still waiting for that good asskickin....

But yay! you updated.