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person Shadow74
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was awesome I so hope you'll write that epilogue :)
person chris
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want the wedding. this story is amazing!!!!
person WalkingContradiction
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic. You didn't change the characters or anything, so it's even more believeable. Oh, and an epilogue is a great idea!
person LitteFurryDice
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, I think you should do an epilog, that would be really cool.
person Rienna
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I'm just getting to reviewing this now. It was fun and fluffy--extra points on the fluffy spectrum. Thanks for letting me know this was out there. It's nice knowing there are other Jou/Mai authors on this site. Keep writing.
person charizardag
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was great!
person charizardag
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice, you discribed things well
person kaibas_baby
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all in all it was a good story except for the part when u put kaiba and tea together. u know he's mine. so was this just a one chapter thing or are you going to add any more chapters to it. it would be interesting if u added onto it, except dont metion kaiba and tea anymore or im going to have to go to your house and jump you, and i will never send u any good pics ever agian. ok. love and peace, steak and tequilla, and of course chocolate. ror. k well i guess ill go back to instant messageing u ok.
person animeloverVS
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it.. hope you write more soon...