AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Say What?

by MalignantEra

person LadyGrey
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Poor Shizuka... but lucky, lucky Kaiba. And readers, too! Well written, no typos that I caught, all in all very nice. Can't wait for the next scene, and actually if your email's in your profile, look for an email from me... my own writing's taking an unscheduled and annoying hiatus, so I have an idea I don't mind giving up if I can see it written and you feel like using it. Good read, update soon, Ja ne! ~LG
person Nocturne22
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* I can't believe you wrote this! What a hentai mind Kaiba has! I loved your ending, how embarassing!
person dawn
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats very gutsy of her