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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pairing. :) I liked it. Nicely characterized too. Spiffy one-shot - will it be tied into the main story?
Also, even though this was a one-shot... have a plot bunny: I was just thinking that it would be interesting if you wrote about Raph trying to make Pegasus get spliced or something. I kept thinking about it when Peg was saying 'not an Inu,' about what if Raph wanted Seto or someone else to make him one. Like I said, just a harmless plotbunny.
Anyways, I'm sure that whatever you write it'll be well written - be it the main story or further one shots of any sort.
Also, even though this was a one-shot... have a plot bunny: I was just thinking that it would be interesting if you wrote about Raph trying to make Pegasus get spliced or something. I kept thinking about it when Peg was saying 'not an Inu,' about what if Raph wanted Seto or someone else to make him one. Like I said, just a harmless plotbunny.
Anyways, I'm sure that whatever you write it'll be well written - be it the main story or further one shots of any sort.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was cute, funny, sweet, hot, and.. ee, everything all rolled into one *^-^*
Whaa, Inu puppies *dies at the cuteness thought*
Whaa, Inu puppies *dies at the cuteness thought*
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo haven't seen Raphael and Pegasus in awhile and seeing them as they are now...KYAA! ^^ THAT WAS SO HOT AND YAOI! ^^:sigh: i just love the smut and lemon/lime scenes XD yada yada...keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chappie on A Home of Our Own...ja ne and UPdate as soon as you can ^_^!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was intense... we need more!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh it was sooo goood.. i want more!!! maybe more fics with these characters..a sequel or not....just more!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so awsome and oh so sweet. I adored puppy Raphy if I ever have a puppy I'm almost certainly going to call him that...if I can ever learn how to spell the stupid name lol. The ending was awsome when he met with Kaiba, I was just like awww they are such a sweet couple and Ishizu was cool even if she did make Peggy jealous. All in all it was a wonderful sweet one shot that I know I'm going to read many times and I'll love it each time!
Velvetina xx
Velvetina xx
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word: wow. okay another word: cute :) i can really see him as a dog a big loyal lab ^^ this is good so far. though the neko fic has my poor head spinning