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for Once Around

by chibinekosaiai

person Kitty_Meow
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its so good! Noit to mention adorable.
You must wright more, or face the wrath of the phyco rveiwers!
person Gantaeno
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Steals Ryou Plushie:: I want more! You can't have him back 'till i get it, ok? :P lol

I like your story; especially the way that Malik gets into it; I'd rather the 'I have too' approach than the 'HELL YEAH!!' any day ;) Keep writing!
person Black Ice
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I LIKE. ^.^ This looks like it's going to be BakuMal, no? I'd prefer that to RyouMal, but it's your story. Very sexy, by the way. The Dungeon. >.< *starts thinking dirty thoughts* No! Bad Icey! Bad, bad, bad Icey! *squeal* This is going to be fun! UPDATE SOON! Now I need to go to bed too (I don't wanna *pouts*)
person MinuetLove
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic beginning! It's got a huge amount of potential and I can't wait to see where this story goes! Keep up the great work!

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