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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best YGO fics i've ever read. quite possibly the best.
in addition to the fact that b/s is about my favourite pairing in this fandom, there's something about this fic that would make me adore it even if i wasn't already in love with this pairing. it's so well written, so twisty and twisted, the characterizations are so spot on, the smut is so good... and the language is just so beautiful. seriously, i'm in love with this story.
aside from the fact that the overall gut-wrenching sadness of this fic makes me want to cry, i also want to cry purely from that fact that it's just so good. i *love* b/s, and there's not nearly enough out there, and i know that when i go to work on my own in-progress b/s story tomorrow, i'm going to be comparing it to this, and finding it lacking.
i really hope you post more fics (or even a sqeuel? hint, hint, hint) soon, because i adore your writing and would really like to see more of it. :)
thank you so much for sharing this fic; it's brill.
-- angryhamster
in addition to the fact that b/s is about my favourite pairing in this fandom, there's something about this fic that would make me adore it even if i wasn't already in love with this pairing. it's so well written, so twisty and twisted, the characterizations are so spot on, the smut is so good... and the language is just so beautiful. seriously, i'm in love with this story.
aside from the fact that the overall gut-wrenching sadness of this fic makes me want to cry, i also want to cry purely from that fact that it's just so good. i *love* b/s, and there's not nearly enough out there, and i know that when i go to work on my own in-progress b/s story tomorrow, i'm going to be comparing it to this, and finding it lacking.
i really hope you post more fics (or even a sqeuel? hint, hint, hint) soon, because i adore your writing and would really like to see more of it. :)
thank you so much for sharing this fic; it's brill.
-- angryhamster
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jaw hanging open with utter shock* Holy shit. That was... amazing... dark and twisted and almost surreal, but damned good. Excellently written.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome fic. You did a great job giving Bakura dimensionality, all too often he's written simply as a sadistic bastard. I loved his internal dialogue, loved the descriptive narrative that described their sexual encounter, you really captured both its violence and heat. Great Job!