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RD: wow Jen this is an amazing start i was wondering why did his Grandpa come up to his room instead of him going to down to Grandpa and then theres the hole leaning on the car or rather holding the car and then him not knowing if he grabed ahold of the right persons arm and why he wasnt looking at them cuz yugi maybe shy but he will always look someone in the eye when hes talking to them and needing to be helped out hehe i kinda figured it out the min Seto said "your eyes" i mean normally a person wouldnt freak over a person eye color or nything so i knew istantly what it was when he said "your eyes" aww poor yugi but that dosnt make him weak like he said i bet he can kick but with the rest of them hehe hes a tought nut to crack if ever i saw one hehe well jen keep up the great work and update soon huh i just hope Seto and Yami give him some due respect its only fair after all sheesh creeps being mean to someone like that i guess he didnt want to cause a hasle or nything hmmm well gtg now JA NE ^__^

I am trying to picture Yugi with a braid...does he look like Duo? ;) Anyway, keep on writing!

wow thats was a surprise i'm enjoying this fic so far so keep up the great work and update soon