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by Kugatsu

schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this broke my heart! i like it so much though! YAY for a dartz one shot!!!!
person velvetiana
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so sad, poor poor poor Ryou. Gawd it kills me when you do angst, I honestly don't normally get emotional over fics but you get to me, your writing is just so beautiful and manages to convey emotions in such a way you can't help be touched by what you are reading. Eeek I'll admit I'm very nervous about your plans, its gonna disrupt lots of things isn't it? ah who cares whatever you'll write I know I'll love it and be there cheering on the sidelines all the way through. Actually at the moment I'm re-reading all of this series in order and I've just finished...tegami (my bad spelling strikes again...sorrie!) and so reading this after that really highlights how their relationship has changed...beautiful. I can't wait for whatever comes next.

LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx
person Wicabeth
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* Poor Ryou! *cuddles him to pieces*
person MarikIshtar77
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! A new pairing! Way to go!! Very interesting thus far, update soon and I will share my voodoo plushies with you!
*hugz*
person BlacKat
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So angsty ans so sad! T_T Ryou really is dedicated to Dartz....T_T Well anyways it was a good chappie yet again so sad...
person Lady Laran
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do I have the feeling you're changing around the couples you put together? Oh poor Ryou! He seemed so lonely. I don't know how Dartz could be so cruel as to ignore him like that! Update soon!!!!!