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awww! i loved this, srto and yugi were soooo cute! would u please please please write a oneshot about them? just a random seto/yugi oneshot? that would be so awesome!

LOL! ^^ Funny chappie! Especially the ending where Ryou locked Dartz out...BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...^^ PLS UPdate soon!

*chuckle* yay go me and Wica. I'm very happy with this fic and wouldn't want anything more, I'm just chuffed that i got it right and am leaving it at that. Anyway moving on...

woot now our very sexy pair of protagonists can't deny their attraction to each other...well their physical attraction although anyone who wasn't physically attracted to either Marik or Seto would have to be examined for brain damage because they are seriously scorchin! *fans her face* lol I'm in a slight perky mood again today...well untill my evil family arrives but I will get through the rest of the day by imaganing the looks on Seto's and Marik's face as they realise they are horney for the other boy...ain't fate a bitch? lol I also loved the ending with the convo between Yugi and Ryou, just too funny and I can just picture Dartz's frustration with Ryou...I want an older brother like Dartz, well actually I'm a very happy only child but if I had to have a sibling I'd want one like Dartz. LOVE IT!!!!

Velvetina xx

Good chapter. I like this story a lot, I think it's your best so far. You should focus on this one (b/c i want to see what happens! *grins*) Um... in a Home of our Own I would say that Noa is the son of Gozy Kaiba and his neko wife, but that seems too obvious. I think he's related to Dartz somehow... like Dartz has neko blood in him and is hiding it. Maybe Noa's his little brother? Or his cousin? Dunno but guess I'll find out, hmm?

Uh oh...now you have done it...I'm addicted to this story! NOOOOO! Now I will obsess about it constantly...by the way...I LOVE THIS STORY! IT IS AWESOME!

I still say Noa is the son of the 'perfect' Neko woman...meh. Anyway I loved this chapter. Mariks realisation that him and Seto where exactly the same was just too funny. It had me in stitches, espesh after my depression yesterday. Yes Yugi being whiney is very very annoying but I also have to say Varon is going to have to have his butt kicked at some point cos he was a very mean boy. Also I love the way that the Iron Spikes are mean and trying to get money for a good reason, however they also are going to have to learn that violence isn't the way and even if they continue down their route they can't beat/ threaten to rape people if teh have a genuine reason for not having money. Heh men are SO clueless but I'm sure they'll understand eventually. Hmm the relationship between Seto and Mokuba was cool, I swear that kid is a grown-up trapped with a childs body...very scary kid but all the same the phrase 'out of teh mouths of babes' applies here because he hit the nail right on the head when he said 'i guess that must mean you like Marik' hell Seto doesn't know it yet but the kid can see it. Also i love dit when Seto was talking about the fact that Mokuba could get half done maths problems past him, it made me giggle cos my dad used to say excatly the same thing to me, ah some things never change despite wether they are fanfiction, fiction or real life, in a way its nice to know that there are some constants going on no matter what, it kinda makes you feel secure.

Eh that was kinda random, i do that occasionally and go into random babbles about...well bugger all really. Anyway I must go now and as ever I LOVE IT!!!!

Velvetina xx

Oooo...longer chappie...XD
MORE DRAMA! MORE DRAMA! AHHH! THE ANGST IS COMING! FIGHTFIGHTFIGHT! XP
^^ I definetely liked chapter 3! T_T But I was so sad for Yugi!...^^ and it is true...Marik does have a cute ass...lol every bishie in the anime world have cute asses and other things...lol.
Who Noa is in A Home of Our Own? Do you mean the kind of cat he is?...:sweat: I have no clue lol...but I'll take a guess...?...umm...hmmm...uhhh...crud oh well i don't know, lol so i'll just find out in fic!
^_^ UPdate as soon as you can! YAY!

Hussah! O_O I lika what I read.

Orignal pairing you've got going on there and you've got a nice 'flowy' type of writing that makes it easy to read. ^^ Mhmm, update soon because I'm dying to see what happens next.

^_^Again an ok story and I'm actually starting to like the story...your writing is natural!
Well anyways can't wait to read the next chappie...XD

Hey!
Just got back from my first ever driving lesson, I'm still surprised that I didn't kill someone!!!!!

Anyway this was such a cool chapter and I reckon I may be able to see where this is sort going and I'm loving it. Marik is just so darn hot really drool worthy, I love it when he's all badass! Yugi is just so cute, I have a friend whoes alot like Yugi in this fic and it just keeps me laughing espesh the part where he was threatening Seto down the phone even though Seto couldn't see him...ah what it would be to be a chibi and getting away with doing silly stuff. Ah you're just so wonderful and as ever this is so beautifully written so go you!

Looking foward to the one shots...all in all this is a good time for Yugioh fanfics and I am SO glad that you started to write it. LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx