rate_review Reviews

*gapes* Dartz...Yugi?! OH MY GAWD!!! You are a frickin genious... hell you have got your fire back big time....I never saw that one coming...I'm speechless...I'm amazed...and oddly turned on lol. Sorry I couldn't resist it but seriously WOW. Hehe the Seto and Marik scenes were cute in a kinda pyschotic way, the fine male ass wondering around in that situation...and all the rest of them is enough to distract anyone. Espesh a girl who is meant to be doing her homework..but who cares for homework when I can come on here and read your work hehe.

I adored this so so so so much. I'm afraid my talent for english has sadly departed for a while and I have no amazing things to say. Its your fault for turning my brain to mush. And yes if you want to write a love triangle you go write it, I'm behind you all the way!

Velvetina xx

*giggles* I loved Ryou/Dartz pairing in the Kimi ga Iru universe, but I think that this little Yugi/Dartz is climbing my list.



Think you'll ever have the Grand Prix characters in your stories?

i love this story. UPDATE SOON OR FEAR THE WRATH OF THE EVIL PIMK BUNNIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*chuckles at the last part* Dartz and Ryou actually make a cute pair of siblings. And Yugi with glasses is still the cutest damn thing ever!

o.O ooo...>< new chappie! like OMG! ^^ lol
Well anyways its good to see one of your stories is UPdate! ^^ Well this was unexpected...^^ and i liked the chappie...:evil laughter: XD especially with the smut scene with Noa and Mokuba...ooo ^^ and i liked in the ending with Kaiba and Marik "flirting" lol = Dwell anyways UPdate when you can! XD yada!

*snicker* great ending to the chappie, I sympathise with Dartz I really do. I have a younger cousin living with me at the moment adn she's driving me mad AND attempting to take away all my friends...little...pain grr.

Aww *pats Schwarzwald on the head* you go eat. You've update two stories with two wonderful chappies, you deserve to eat. I'd give you food but the only thing I can make is cheesecake...do ya like cheesecake? Also theres the issue of getting it to you lol.

*glomp* The Marik Seto convo, was just far too awsome. They so blatently want each other...so hot *drools* I loved the line "If I want too see a hot ass I'll look in the mirror" its just a totally classic line and fits Kaiba perfectly. Also the Mokuba/Noa kiss was so so hot and yay Noa has a firend now. Two people who are meant to be in my opinion and they way you write it is just fantastic.

Anyway I'd best go I can hear my horror of a cousin appraoching and if she see's this she wont hesitate to go ring her mum and tell her that I'm read (seriously hot) male/male action, my aunt will then ring my folks who will then come and get on my case for showing homosexual erotic porn to my 'deslicate' 'sweet' little cousing. GAH!

Love it Velvetina xx

*snicker* I loved the 'he'd sprung a leak' thing, just one classic moment. As ever Yugi and Ryou causing mayhem was a great moent, although you have gotta feel for Dartz being stuck in that house....or then again you could just laugh at his misfortune...mwahahahaha!!!

Meh school sucks, don't let it get you down too much. Although I am starting again next week so maybe I shouldn't talk untill I know how I'm gonna deal with it. LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx

Sorry to hear that that was the last chapter for you(well you know what i mean) but it was still great ^^ especially the scene with Mokuba and Noa...and yea school bites >.<

*giggles* Kaiba sprunk a leak XD

I don't need anything *^-^* Just seeing more stories makes me happy! But I'm happy I guessed right!


Wait, I know what I want.. I want my computer back *weeps* I want to update my story!