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awesome story looking forward to the next chapter

I would like to read more Yugioh fics by you. Why haven't they been updated?

Woot an update! Glad to see you back here alive and well. I loved the chapter. I am now very very torn between whether to support Dartz/Yugi or Varon/Yugi but either way I think that your writing style makes both couples look cute and the situations seem plausible. Oh dearie me Seto sounds kinda upset at the moment, methinks that he needs the rather sexy and dangerous leader of the Iron Spikes to come and cheer him up. Tee hee I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter because the banter you write between those two is always a delight to read. Glad to see you back espesh since you've update both of your stories. Love it!

Velvetina xx

Oh my gosh...Dartz! That's got to hurt so much. Things are progressing well for Ryou and Raph though (that evil Britain with his stuffed kitty of doom. ^.^) I can't wait to see some Marik/Seto action; the cell phone should die. Of course I forgive you for taking forever to update (can't say anything for the other fans), this being updated today was actually good as I was having a sucky day (have had little sleep for the last few days, was in horrific mood, had to had scheduale modified so I wouldn't kill anybody.) Of course, it would have been more helpful if I had read it earlier because hearing one of our (rather reserved) liberians swear over the phone (several times,) 'Bony and I rolling our eyes over Jan's ridiculous (and new to me) crush on Chris Brown, and accidently punching Ally in the mouth (my hand killed,) cheered me up already, but it was still a great thing to find a new chapter today.

Love it!! ^_^

Gah I missed that last time...why waterhoses?! Lol, the whole Raphy (yes i STILL can't spell) and Ryou thing was so totally cool. I am also practically dying of curiosity to find out who the hell Yugi is going to end up with! Seriously Dartz or Varon... ah I love tha fact that you are managing to keep me guessing...unless I'm crazy. Although I ave a feeling Ryou may object to Yugi getting with his older brother, but on the other hand unless Yugi toughens up a bit he may have issues with Varon.

*fans self* the kiss between Marik and Seto was so SO HOT!! Seriously wow, i was sitting here mouth hanging open in amazement. It was just so passionate...filled with emotion. Just WOW. Not to mention it was so cool that Marik told Seto why he needed that particular amount of money, I Seto is blatently gonna break down and give it to Marik...well maybe, who ever really knows what that eccentric CEO is going to do. Except you since you're writing this lol! And yes the ending was slightly corny but its was a great contrast to the rest of their relationship which has been all fighting and fire. Very good.

Seriously you neevr fail to amaze me, truely awsome. Love it

Velvetina xx

I am turning into a Schwarzwald fangirl! I love your stories they just keep getting better and better. I will wait with baited breath for your new chapter.

Hrm, Raphael/Ryou.. Never thought about that pairing before!

PLEASE UPDATE!! YOU ROCK!!! always will!! ;)

^^ UPdate! UPdate! >w< YAY! lol...o.O Eya! >< Dartz and Yugi kissed at the end XD Nya!