rate_review Reviews

I just read this while listening to the spanish version of satellite, very hot! The song goes well with this fic. Satellite would be just the song Bakura would dance to. The only suggestion I would make is to have the song lyrics in italics or something to make the text seperate from the story, thus making it easier to read. More deatil of smut would be great to ;p But good job on the first try.

::Sprays self with hose:: That was so yummy and delicious! I love seeing the loving side of Bakura, and you did a great job with it. Will there be a second chapter? Let's hope so!

you did a really good job!!..^^...keep it up!