rate_review Reviews

that was a soooooooooooo sad i almost freakin cried pllleeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeee write more!!!!!

What a question!?! More napkins, more mush, MORE STORY! Please! Its just brilliant!!!! Love the way you do the two guys!!!

good job. I love this story. You write very well.

TOT

P.S. I noticed you posted a Disclaimer, but you didn't say that you didn't own Yugioh. You should put that or this nice fic will be deleted.

Hey hey, keep it coming! I was sad when i realized there were only two chapters... ^^ I wants more.

A little fast on the letting down of barriers to the point of making confessions, but under the extraordinary circumstances and with their much longer history together as the backdrop it is believable. I am loving the story, and appreciate the realistic touches -- that it is not easy to recover that quickly from that amount of abuse. I look forward to more.

Poor Seto!!! Without going into explicit detail of the rape you managed to bring across his pain very well. I mean, I like rape scenes (being the sick person that I am), but every once in a while they will be so graphic that the meaning and depth of the story doesn't come across. You've done a good job of stearing clear of that, choosing to focus on Kaiba's agony (both physical and mental) as well as his desperation to succeed.Also, you've done a great job as far a character interaction is concerned. So it's a bit mushy. What's not to love about mushy? Anyway, great fic. I hope to read more soon.

-TOT

awww its a cute mushy tho. I like it keep going. BTW, its "Mokuba" not "Mokubo"