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Wah!!! Yugi's so sexy like that... but not in that situation!!! >.< Kaiba, you're an asshole!!! I'll kill your myself!!!! What's gonna happen? Is Yugi going to stay with Kaiba? Will the others save Yugi before Seto goes too far and really hurts Yugi? Will that stupid, ignorant *rants off names and insults* of a Yami ever see what the fuck is going on?!?! *tears at hair in frustration*

Done ranting, my apologies. I really want to see what's going to happen! Please update soon!!!

RD: hmm well kinky ill give it that but just one small lil thing *speeds off to Yami and Tea's campsite then grabs them then speeds back to domino grabs kaiba then speeds off to her own mansion and takes them to ur certified master torture chamber and chains them to spiked wrist and ankle bands conected to chains that keeps there backs connected to space cold(meaning that the wall is as cold as space so its burning to there skin)and covered in slimmy bumpy uncomfortable rocks*now let the fun *smirk begin* now kaiba as i said kinky but i will not tolerate u hitting Yugi its no different then sips of blood ill allow most of it cuz Yugi seems to enjoy it as he does in this story but hitting is not tolerated in my book so ill take a leaf from ur book but instead of machines ill use good old magic *conjurs up ten thousand solid steel diamond coated whips and each on gives all three of them 4300 lashings each then she conjurs a sandstorm made of salt to really make there lashings burn then first with Kaiba sends out evil BEWD ripping him to shreds and turning him into there fodder then she brings him back to life and launches tons of the most excrutiating curses and poisions till hes a walking corpse then she moves on to Tea and turns her head and face into her punching bag and keeps hiting her again several times till she's bleeding out of her ears eyes nose mouth until her face is drenched in blood then with a necro ghost hand she uses it to take tea's heart out of her chest without going through said chest then takes it over to yami and puts the illusion that its his fav food and he devours his GFs heart while she screams in shear agony cuz she feels ever bite and scrap and the pain is increased to more then what ppl could bare then she revies her one last time then she dumps several kegs of vodka everclear and other dangerously strong alcohols and then gasoline then launches a medium sized fire ball and shes consumed by it entirely and only her cuz due to RD's sheild the fire wont explode outward due to the fuel when Tea is delt with RD moves to Yami next and fills his mind with all the horrific act kaiba has commited on yugi and every time the same words are repeated "its ur fault u did this to him if u had actually paid more attention he wouldnt have wound up kaibas personal toy"till he riddled with guilt and she keeps sending more and more mentaly and emotionally painful thoughts and visions till he dies of a broken heart she revives him then shows it all again till hes loaded with so much depression that she unchains him and sends him to a chamber that would soon be filled with heavly toxic poisionous and all out dangerous gases to make him die extreamly painfully while its all played in his mind that his hikari is how he is cuz of him *ok now thats over with keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE

whoa whats going on will they save him what did they see keep writing

*rubs armr to ward off a chill* WHY do I all of sudden have a extreme bad feeling about this?! Yugi's disappearances cannot be good! And last I checked, Seto HATES Yami! I think he would do anything to get revenge! Oi, Marik and Bakura! If you need help robbing Seto blind, I'm willing to lead a hand! Just leave Mokuba out of this! He adores Yugi, and I cannot see him harming Yugi!

keep going please its good whats wrong with yugi keep going

This story is really good. You should continue

Awesome story! *practically fell over in shock when Kaiba asked Yugi to be his boyfriend* What's going on?!? I wanna know what's gonna happen! *throttles Yami and chases him with a baseball bat* Grrr.... Stupid Yami *walks around muttering curses* Tea, go away! go date someone else! Let our little Yugi have his true love!!!

Ok, done ranting. Sorry bout that! I'm too excited. Like I said, awesome story. never seen it before, so it'll be excellent! I'll be looking for updates every day. I'm sure I'll be one of the first to review every update! Keep up the good work!!!!