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hmmm...well, I dont know where you get those jap terms but you shouldnt use them when you dont know how. the verb always comes as last and seem to ignore the use of word "wo". and daisuki means to like a lot someone, though not love as there is a difference between love and love in jap XP find someone who could do better job than you in this. also, I dont really like one thing about this fic..so many foreign words, too much, your fic is just overflowing with them and it just so sucks to scroll all the way time like every few sentences to look for the meaning of words. to be honest, the one thing that actually brought me into reading this thing, which would be a use of other languages, is actually putting me off; its annoying. maybe you should put the translations on the top of the fic or directly write a translations next to the words..or better, not use any foreing words.

otherwise I honestly like your fic and this is by no means a flame. I honestly like it and the whole plot is appealing to me and very interesting. you dont have to listen to me or what, I just dont want to do those "omfg, I love this, update" kind of reviews so sue me XP be sure as hell Id welcome to see another chapter of this fic so you can just ignore this review, fushuuuuuu~~ -_-

OMG that was awesome. *bounces insanely* ^-^ I love the way you write Yuugi, and i love the flashbacks. Little Yuugi is so adorable. ^-^
I really want to know what happened to Yuugi in those past years. I am sure Atemu wants to know too. And try to heal poor Yuugi.
I like the addition of Bakura into this story. And the idea that Yuugi can only see Atemu clearly. I am assuming it would be the same for Ryou, except he'd be able to see Bakura instead of Atemu. I also love the idea of the mind link making them able to understand each other properly. Thats something i definitely haven't seen before, but it makes perfect sense.
Also, I adore the way you show the symbolism of the things in Yuugi's soulroom. Awesome description.
I can't wait until the next chapter, because i am dying to know what Atemu's reaction will be, to all of the things he's seen. What will he do to help Yuugi? And what does Yuugi make of all of this?
I am glad you decided to keep using the egyptian words. They really add an awesome touch to this story. Please update soon, and i am looking forward to your updates on your other stories also. ^_~

I am glade up put in chapter 2; I just love this chapter. Its awesome: I hope to see a chapter3 and soon. I want to see what happens next to Yugi and Yami. I just hope when you up date that I see the next chapter. I want you to know that I like all of your stories

What happened to Yugi! Was he beaten? That's so sad... Yami must make him love him again... brilliant story

I am completely in love with this fic! you are such a wonderfull writer! I Squealed and jumped and just loved every second of this first chapter! I love the way you portray Yugi and I love your style and well I love every thing... only thing is im jumping back and forth from top back to where I was reading for the translations lol got a little lost at some points but I still love the dif languages! Any ways I really hope you completely finish this I really do enjoy reading all of your fics your soooo talented!! and Know Im off to chapter two! again great work!

Hola! :D

I love this chapter, and the story. ^_^ I hope you write more soon! I adore ALL of your Yu-Gi-Oh! stories, and I look forward to reading more! :D Keep writing, you do such a good job! See you!

~Raineh

Hi Lechan ^^ I really enjoyed this update, it had all of the elements that I love in a ygo story. I applaude you with your wonderful work on this story as well as your others. Hope to read more of this and your other ygo works soon.

Lechan thank you. I have wait long for this chapter and I love it. Don't worry that not all is grammatic orekt with you hieratji. We don't know for shure how ancient Egypian speak and how is that good and not. I don't know who tell you that what you write is bad. Please don't read when somone write that shit. That is not true. Send him or her to hell. I will help you. You are doing great job. And I tell you, I wait for all what you write. Drool. I wait for next chapter "Mou hitori..." and hope that now Yugi will "show" Atemu that he love him - you know what I mean... poor, poor Atemu now he will know what Yugi make for him. I want that see - Dara see in hers brain that Yugi tie Atemu and rape him - drooooolllll. I really like seme Yugi - I am bad gril and I am proud for that. Love Lechan - Dara.
Ps. I hope that you will send me that song/

YAY!!! Another great chapter though it takes a while to read it was worth it though sometimes it's a little more than confusing @.@ i think my brain is frizzled anyway i love how you use three different languages it sort of accents your point or the thought/phrase the person is saying it works very well

I can't believe you ended it there! oh man I am soooo loving this fic! I can't wait for more you are sooo amazing! great great job! I loved every second of this chapter just like the first! Man this is pure talent! great job keep up the great work!