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for The Key of Ra

by Lechan

person Mazchan
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea and thought in this one...very intriguing. I must say I really look forward to reading updates in this one. Great writing. ;)
person LY37
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Lechan for your hieratic explanation. I agree with some of the other reviewers - jeez, it is a fanfiction story, and a very good one. Get a grip. LeChan, please press on with this story. It is wonderful. You give what I believe is most important - a very good story. Doesn't matter how long your chapters are, it all ends too soon. More, please.

Seems whatever you write I will love. And whatever you will write I hope I'm there to read it.

And thank you for taking the time to give us the translations - they are very much appreciated.

I do hope you complete this story. And especially Memories of Light and Shadow - I am so looking forward to the completion of that story - Yugi dancing is oh so wonderful. Anyway, this is a Key of Ra review... Thank you so much for the update.

I look forward to all your updates. Thanks for sharing your talent. Thank you for continuing the stories to completion (I hope). Hope all is well in your world.
person December Jewel
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very interesting! Continue soon! ^_^
person inuyasha nut
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love dis
pls pls pls update!!!!!!!!!!!1
person Din Kelion
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoyed reading your two chapters! Not only did it make a super-wonderful fan fiction to read, but it also preoccupided my entire sick day! With out it, I most likely would of been smacking my head against something particularly hard to numb the feeling of boredom. I liked everything about these two chapter! Well, okay, almost everything, I'm very horrible with Japanese and ur.. Egyptain, so I constantly end up scrolling back and forth to the glossary so I can understand some things. But this isn't at your fault- it's mine for not being able to understand different languages (If only I could!)
Other than that, I had noticed a few typos (hard to catch- but utterly irrevelant because it never daunted my fascination to your story!) I loved your fan fiction, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Liliath
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, me again..your mail hates me..or better, my mail hates yours, it wont send the mail V_V whatever..anyways, yeah, its me, you got the right person and Im glad you reacted the way you did; no insults or swearing ^^ it was actually kinda obvious that you were taking jap classes ah, but whatever, some people dont take em and know the words so ..argh..forget it -__- >_> yeah, just wanted to say this and that I honestly appreciate your work and words. hope to see another chappie from you. Im an angst addict *hinthint*
person bluesun
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......... AWSOME!!! I LOVE ALL UR STORIES!! YOU ROCK!! PLEASE HURRY WITH IT!! could u email me at one of my adresses i'd love to talk with u
person Jaklyn
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!!! Jaklyn is addicted! You simply must update. I don't usually read Yami/Yugi, but you have sucked me in completely. The use of three, THREE, languages is neat. I can barely put up with the spanish i have to learn in school. I could never do that. There's something special about you and your Blood Moon friend. I thank you profusely, but my friends hate you. I've been trying to get them to read this. I guess I really AM annoying. I'm getting off topic. I love this fic, update, please and thank you!
person Jaklyn
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!!! Jaklyn is addicted! You simply must update. I don't usually read Yami/Yugi, but you have sucked me in completely. The use of three, THREE, languages is neat. I can barely put up with the spanish i have to learn in school. I could never do that. There's something special about you and your Blood Moon friend. I thank you profusely, but my friends hate you. I've been trying to get them to read this. I guess I really AM annoying. I'm getting off topic. I love this fic, update, please and thank you!
person dip
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wowzers! This is so kewl!! Gawdammit how could you cliff us like that!?? Anywho, you shouldn't let a bad review bother you. lol! You should feel proud that people are fighting over your fic! Besides, for every bad review you've got about ten fan reviewers ready and willing to tear it apart. So, chin up =3 and leave the rest to lunesta -_o...

btw i luv yugi's sarcasm. Funny mess ;3