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for The Key of Ra

by Lechan

schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excelllent story. I hope you continue it. I love Yugi's innocence and love of Yami. I hope he regains some of his trust for him. Anzu seems to reall subscribe to the ostrich theory. She really is an overprotective overbearing mother.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I loved it. I hope you finish it.
person Laie
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! I hope you update it soon, I really wanna read more!!
person ShadowDreamers
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo good. I loved it. You did such a great job. I've been meaning to read this forever and I finally got around to it. I only wish I'd read it sooner. And I hope you udate it soon. Poor Yugi! I can't wait for more!!!
person razzle
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes you are awesome this is so spooky and creepy but real nice to your an awesome writer this is really cool are you ever gonna add to it though you got me now i need to no whats happening next for real this is awesome though ja ne
person Sanni York
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaah! This is so good! I love this story, really!
Only two chapters, but they are long. You know what I thought about last night when I read the second? That you don't rush into action in your fics. You let the story take its time in a delicate way and also realistic. For instance when they ate, many authors would just skip dinner really and go right on to the main point. You take your time. ^^ I love it and I hate it, cuz you see, I want it to happen fast.^^ But really, I love your writing.
I hope you post next chapter soon, though I do wonder how long it takes to write them. I have trouble with every little detail sometimes and I am jealous of the smooth running in yours.
And by the way, the hieratic you use, is it ok to use some of the words in future fics? ^^ I know they're not really yours, but I just ask in case you might be offended or something.
Please update soon.^^
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story!!! Please update.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know how life and muses go, but I do hope you plan on finishing this tale someday soon. I'm entranced by it and hope to see this story resolved. I want to know about Yugi's past and how Yami will heal him.
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest?
*looks under her computer chair blanket*
Nope, not there...
person Beldara
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Lechan I want more from "Key of Ra".