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for Alone

by Darknessmaster

person YaminoMisao
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the Yami x Bakura x Seto pairing! And I really like this story, I think he should confront both of them...
person star
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i like your storie it would be cool if you did all three . ive neever seen bbakura yami and seto togaeeether that would be interiesting
person Ice Angel
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!! Great job so far! I really like it so much. Hmmm...I think somethin where he confronts Seto but Yami is either hidin or pretendin to be asleep would be cool. That could lead to some confrontations later on with Bakura thinkin that only Seto knows 'n not Yami.

Anyways can't wait for the next update!!

Till then

~IceAngel~
person Black Ice
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THe chapters are short, but it's still good. Oh, and, I vote B). ^.^ Update!
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do STRIP POKER!!!!
Bring it on! ^^
person yami990
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good please continue. my vote is for A. truth or dare. leaves cookies to help authoress continue.
person Saka
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really nice chapter! So lets see how about strip poker- the other two have been done waaaay toooooo often. But strip poker is a really cool idea! Anyways I like this fic so far. So as the Bakura fanatic I am I beg ya to update soon again! *pushes over all the sweets she owns* Please *puppy dog eyes*
person bishojoshadow@yahoo.com
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Strip Poker! truth and dare is used so often it would be nice to see somthing diffrent, or you can make it strip truth or dare ^_~
person Ice Angel
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls to the floor* Ya can't just leave it there! Update soon again, please!! I gotta read more, great pairin idea addin Seto, this is goin to be so cool. Update soon again!! I can't wait.

~IceAngel~
person bishojoshadow
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a little dissapointed because it was so short but other than that i hope you continue, the pairing is one you dont see often, you can usually find a Bakura/Yami pairing but not one with Seto thrown in the mix! I hope you update soon.