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for Alone

by Darknessmaster

person Mali
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm for b) too. Fun stuff at the mansion, but without Mokuba.. And don't make us wait to long please..
person Sarah
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man your chapters are way to short. So short its annoying.. not flaming you, i like it but ack, just try a little harded to make them longer.
Anyways i vote C ^-^
Oh and dont you DARE stop the lemon half way through and go "should Yami join in?" because you just.. don't do that okay LOL XD

Melikes. I love this pairing, ive never found a fic before though *dance*
Update soon!
person AngelRavenDove
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! I need more! I say do the fun stuff at the Kaiba Mansion!
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i choose b and let mokuba join in to
person Kat
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A) he pretends to be asleep

this is so cool
Greets
Kat
person Saka
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...ok great chapter. This fic is pretty darn good so far! Hmmm...... I think you should have Yami awake. That would be cool since Seto wants his fantasy to be lived out. Great job! Can't wait for more!! Update soon.

~IceAngel~
person azhur
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don't know what to choose... how about the second one yami awake... update soon!!!
person yami990
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
B B let it be B. please continue this one soon. leaves pocky.
person MinuetLove
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting short chapter! Wish it was longer! Keep up the good work!
person Kat
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, cool fic

i'd say seto only, while Yami is PRETENDING to be asleep

Greets
Kat