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I liked the revenge of that. It fit perfectly as payback. I do want a happy ending though between Bakura and Ryou... But I definately understand how one wouldn't fit and such. I can't wait for your update. This is awesome!

Great so far!! I can't wait to see what happens next! I loved it as Ryou threw that line back at him!!!! Please update soon!!

Very nicely done. The first chapter, I couldn't review afterward reading it because my heart broke for poor Ryou and I was in a mood... The second chapter was incredible. I was very happy to see that Ryou didn't fall in on himself in despair. That he slipped a bit by giving in to temptation, allowing Bakura to take him again was so natural. That he also found hearing that Bakura loved him after what he had been left to deal with alone, classic. Loved the fact that Ryou used Bakura's parting line on him. I am very interested to see how Bakura AND Ryou handle their relationship now. Love it!

Very well written! I think you really captured Ryou's emotions well. See? You're not a bad writer, not at all! I liked it alot...Dunno why you wouldn't let me see it before.

You're a better writer than meeee, see? ;-;! Was it a one shot? Gah, hate when things havta end so sadly...stupid Bakura. I want to deck him in the nose. -Sniff.- If you were gonna write more, you should write more! I want a happy ending or at least for Ryou to get his revenge! Whee!

Love you loads. <3

...And keep on writing such lovely things!

I really like this. It was somewhat depressing though. Could you make another chapter? Or a sequle? I don't know if this is a one shot or not. But it really is good and desearves more. Excetera. I can't wait to see what you plan to do. Update soon!

very well written but so sad!!!! will there be more to this?