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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so beautiful and emotional. Its nice to read a story where Bakura is treated the same way he treated Ryou. I still can't help but feel sorry for their realtionship. Please write more soon.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
but i haffs no children for you to eat |o| ...sorry! But i'll review, so the point is moot :}
I liked it, and am glad Ryou got his revenge. MORE! (poor asagi, being used liked that XD)
Kuro
I liked it, and am glad Ryou got his revenge. MORE! (poor asagi, being used liked that XD)
Kuro
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love Ryou's character development in the second chapter. I tend to get a little tired of the stereotypical victim!Ryou that seems to be 90% of all tendershipping. You really give both characters very human qualities and I can say the story has that much more depth because of it.
Unfortunately it would appear that you haven't updated this story in three years so I'll never get to see how it all pans out, but from the terms of a one-shot with a sequel it holds up quite well.
Unfortunately it would appear that you haven't updated this story in three years so I'll never get to see how it all pans out, but from the terms of a one-shot with a sequel it holds up quite well.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update..... Its been like forever since I've read a fic that has Ryou as an evil little 'super goddess'! Please.... I love how Bakura reacted!!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your gonna eat my children...*looks around* I have children?! Why didn't anyone ever tell me?! Damn why do people complain about labor? I swear I never felt a thing...
Ok your probably wonderin where's your review...well here it is- this fic is just amazing. I love it. 'N hope ya do write more. The way you've written this is just beautiful. Amazing work. I absolutely love it, 'n wanna read more soon! ^_~
~IceAngel~
Ok your probably wonderin where's your review...well here it is- this fic is just amazing. I love it. 'N hope ya do write more. The way you've written this is just beautiful. Amazing work. I absolutely love it, 'n wanna read more soon! ^_~
~IceAngel~
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down* Don't leave it there, almost killing me to find out what Bakuras gonna do!!! Truely awsome story though loved your take on this idea.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o... so evil... the lemons are so lemony sweet! Ryou is so revengyful... its not even a word. oh well. update! and you can't eat my childern cause I dont have any! HA! ^_^ (i'm fourteen)
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol ain't pay back a bitch lol ih god i love this story please update soon
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I-a eat Bakura. Nicely written with Ryou's emotions. Then afterwards....is there going to be another chapter? Cause you should continue, it's nicely written.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg!
ok, so what goes around comes around but still
omg, I'm speechless, and that was....SO GOOD!
ok, so what goes around comes around but still
omg, I'm speechless, and that was....SO GOOD!