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for Beautiful Night

by YoakeRyuu

person darkrosedamael
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chappie! they must be so confused, poor baku and ryry.
person Jessica
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm....not bad...I like an AU story!...I feel for Ryou; I almost dread reading the next chapter cuz I know he'll get yelled at! I thought you would at least make Ryou surprise Bakura with his skills...it's nice that you are slowly showing signs of the relationships building b/w the gang, but a few questions...why was it neccessary to kill Marik off so soon? I felt that he could have been quite useful in later plot lines...and I know this sounds random, but is Bakura gay? It doesn't say clearly and so I'm wondering how you are going to approach their relationship when the situation arises. I was hoping for more action b/w Ryou and Bakura rather than the others but it has been entertaing, nonetheless...keep at it! Good job! Hope to see some 'Kura/Ryou action real soon! ^_^
person vixenia
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME. I liked the chappie. nyahahahaha. it was really like they were talking about a porn magazine. Heh. That was too funny. please update soon. bai bai
person MajaLi
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude...! I really like where this's going; gang writing's hard. Do we get to see any of the (happy!) pairings come to fruition? *irresistable pleading puppy dog eyes* Can't wait for more,
~T-chan
person Sassafrassquatch
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this fic, it's one of my favorite styles of writing (the stealing, killing type, hehe >.<) Its a bit...out of character, but I love it!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...! I love it! I read the first two chapters a while ago. I'm glad you updated two more!! It's awesome!! Update soon!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...yeah this did twist a lot!! I can't wait to see where you take it!
person Camille
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura is MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAN!!! HEHEHEHEH!! Poor Ryo! Why is Yami so clingy to Yugi?
person Edogawa Conan
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Ayonom
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I was expecting a bit more! lol hey, I like it so far keep it up! but i'm a little worried... brothers..?