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for Beautiful Night

by YoakeRyuu

person darkrosedamael
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no baku cant leave it was saposed to work out! wahhhhhhhh! *sob* write more i need to know waht hapends.
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... Bakura can't leave...he has to be with Ryou... Now I'm sad. Thay really have to be together, I mean... They both love eachother, Why run away? I don't think that their friends would hate them... I think that they'd understand... Oh well. Please update soon...
person BloodyTiger911
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Though, there's only two more chapters left?! I wanted a lemon between Ryou and BakuraT^T Good old incest! Might there be one? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... I still like the fic, but I don't like the MalikYami, YamiMalik pairing/thing... I kind of wanted YamiYugi and MarikMalik... 'Cause that's hot... But mainly I prefer BakuraRyou... I live on it... Anyway. Update soon!! I still love it! I know that Ryou and Bakura really love eachother!!! PLEASE continue!
person Jessica
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aieeee...that was too good for words! Can't wait to read more! Ja! ;__;
person vixenia
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blinks I have never read a malikxyami before but...THIS WAS INCREDIBLY AWESOME. I hope Bakura and Ryou have the same happy ending. brothers or not.
person Cherry
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know... I don't understand one thing: On the one hand, you write about the guys killing people absolutely emotionless. on the other hand you describe the rape of malik as something terrible. But not because he was RAPED, but because he was raped by his BROTHER....
I really don't get it....
person SexxiTwistedAngel
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's very good, and as for losing touch with reality a bit. That's okay, it still works.
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... This fic is awesome...! At the moment, I can't live without it... Um, Ryou just walked away after what Bakura said... Was he going to think about the fact that his brother might LIKE him(I really hope he does... I mean, he seems to...)?, or the fact that he POSSIBLY likes Bakura back(I can pretty much tell that he does... at least I hope...)? You can tell that they like eachother... And the fact that Bakura's warming up to Ryou is a 1-Up, I mean... Wow. I'm REALLY glad they kissed! I LOVE twincest... I just think that it's wierd that they're brothers in this fic... Well, twincest makes it better, but... Wow, you're good at writing... I wish I could write like you(I can't write at all). Sorry. I'm just rambling on about nothing at the moment... I'm really sorry... ANYway. I hope you update soon!!! I love this fic sooo much!! Bye-bye!! =)
person ladywolfTerri
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Poor Kura and Ryou though, all confused. I hope you can update soon, I'm really curious to see how they interact after that and especially around the gang.