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for Beautiful Night

by YoakeRyuu

person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad ,not bad at all I like it .....great ending if it was
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful-amazing-fantastic-hot-fucking-ass-kicking-fucking-brilliant-good-fucking-great-fucking-good-fucking-good-shit

MiM

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person Jessica
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet! It truly twas a beautiful night for those two! ^__^
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They finally got it on!! Now I'm happy... Great ending(if it was)...
person vixenia
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cries. What a beautiful story. I loved it. I hope all your future stories will be just as good
person darkrosedamael
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw that was so cute! is there more? is that it? all done?
person Jessica
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'll admit that the Seto/Yugi pairing has never particularly thrilled me because of the whole 'pedophile' aspect...and I was a bit wary to jump into this one as well, especially seeing as how Yug' is 14 (YIKES! O O)...but overall, I think it was written very tastefully. And I like the way you described Malik as switching from naive to a downright pervert! I could definitely see where Yami will have to watch his back (heck, his whole body) when around Malik! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the other characters! Ja!
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! i LOVE it! And Malik. teehee! update soon! i'm DYING to find out what happens next between ryou and bakura!
person vixenia
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME. ME LIKIE. SPECIALLY THAT LAST PARAGRAPH. GOOD JOB. NUUUU DON'T LET RYOU AND BAKURA SPLIT APART. THEY BELONG TO EACHOTHER. T.T
person Jessica
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm happy to hear that it's almost over! And that's terrible what Ryou practically forced Bakura to do (i.e. leave)! I hope Ryou will change his tune first before he loses Bakura for good!...Which brings me to one question: are you the angsty-type?...See you in the final two chapters! Ja!