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for The XX Factor: x II *completed*

by Wicabeth

person SakuraNeko
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::falls over laughing:: He doesn't know how to use the bathroom! That's great! I hope you update soon!
person Owaranaimono Aite
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! *falls over laughing* I read the first story and this one all in one day! I'm bad. I should be doing other things... Excellentness! There's just a little thing twitching in the back of my mind that something horrible's gonna happen to someone in the course of this story.. *shoves it away* I can't wait to see what happens next!!
person maggiemay
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*proudly beams at new Gravitation Fanaddict* Dances dizzily....I have all 13 eps plus the OVA..and songs and mpg's and...la li ho! I love Yuki Eiri...and I smoochies Shuichi...but I wanna DO bunny boi ryuichi...lol...come here bunny boi...I have some cookies for ya...fresh baked cookies all for Ryu-chan. ROFLMAO.

Ahem...I know I have told you time and time again...but since I never get tired of saying it...and you should never get tired of hearing it...YOU ROCK ON ROLLER SKATES *snickers* I love this chappie...poor Yugi...I wonder if Yami is a good plumber? Ah...and I can't wait to see the shopping trip...I can so see Yugi in cute little lavender bra and matching panties...lovely front snap...and sheer lacy...wooooo

Hugs...and get some sleep.

Maggiemay
person Sarah Costa
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now Yugi will learn some things...So what happen next? I can't wait to know. Keep up the great work. Please update soon. Ja ne
person Yami Yuugi
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, tis great to see this sequel up. Hope to read more soon.
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I may?

Please don't play the "surprise! it's actually YAMI having the baby! teehee irony" card that so many authors have beaten to death. You're so much better than that.

That being said, I am gleefully awaiting the next chapter. ^_^
person MinuetLove
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the original and this one starts out just as entertaining! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person SakuraNeko
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the previous XX Factor, and I already love this one. Please update soon!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! The sequel is here! *laughs*

Asuka is a sweetie, and Jou is so generous... I'm glad that Yami and Yugi will get the chance to have a child of their own. Though I'm still wondering who the 'mommy' is going to be...
person maggiemay
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeee....I love the part of Jou tellin' Yug' the facts. LOL...perfect.

Maggiemay