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let him have his period u'r not a woman until u have ur period

::hugs:: I love you! Apology accepted, just keep up the good work!

Ahh, so sweet! The shopping trip was cute, but it should be even more funny to watch Yugi dress himself! Write more soon please!

Squeeeee Wonderful...love it...nice and long. Now get back to work. WHimpers..

OH MY GOD!!! That was beautiful!!!! I need more tissues! I have all kinds of happy tears going on now! First I had tears of laughter at Yugi trying to get dressed and having to wear 'that' shirt. "Spooning leads to forking" made me laugh so hard I nearly peed my pants!! :D Then, the proposal! Good God Almighty, that was the best one I have ever heard! The scene was so realistic and heartfelt that I burst into tears as if it were really happening! I can't wait to see what the rings end up looking like! The ones that Joey and Seto have fit them perfectly and I imagine that Seto will have rings crafted for Yami and Yugi that will match them perfectly too. I love that the colored stones match their eyes! I'm such a sucker for this kind of stuff! :D Update soon!!
Koneko
P.S. I can't believe you left out the engagement sex!! Everybody has engagement sex!! Ugh! :D I just knew that that was where the whole romantic dinner was leading, but no! Bad author, teasing me like that!! :D
P.P.S. Thanks for the info about the pics! I'm gonna check 'em out ASAP!!

this is cool keep on writing

very good please update soon

That's alright! It's good to know what's going on. I hope your evil computer comes back soon... I sense evil magic. XD Well I'll be waiting for the update. ^-^

Hi! I love this! I started reading it a few days ago and then I realized that this was a sequel so I had to go back and read part 1 - which was absolutely fabulous!! :D Joey's unusual journey thru womanhood was a fantastic way to get around that old mpreg problem that some people have. (I never understood people who freak out over mpreg stories. Don't these people have an imagination?) Your idea of the Bakura/Marik chemical was quite clever! Oh! Before I forget - and yes I should have said all this in a review of part one instead of throwing it in here (gomen!) - I ADORED the wedding ring that Kaiba gave Joey! *Sqweee!* I just melted at how totally perfect it was to have a ring with both a blue eye and a red eyes on it! *sigh!* Who knew Kaiba could be so romantic? KAWAII!! And the honeymoon - gotta love that lemony goodness!! :D

ANYWAY, all that aside, I do have some questions about Yugi's upcoming pregnancy. In several places, Yugi says "children" and "grandchildren" implying more that one kid. Are Yami and Yugi going to have more than one child together? O_O Is Yugi going to have twins maybe? *giggle* Can you imagine little Yugi all bloated up with twins?! :D poor guy! Yugi is going to make the cutest bride!! By the way, do you draw? I would love to see how you imagine Joey and Yugi as women! :D

Update soon - like now if not sooner!! :D
Koneko

P.S. Oh! I bet that Watari from Yami no Matsuei (aka Descendants of Darkness) would love to talk to Marik and Bakura about their little potion! Enma knows that Watari's been trying to perfect that concoction for ages! :D Watari's been outdone by a pair of juvenile delinquents! too funny! :D This was the first thing I thought of when I started reading part 1. :D

P.P.S. OK. Sorry this review is so disjointed but that is just how my brain works sometimes. Random thoughts bounce in my head and come out just however they come out. Sorry again I didn't leave that review for part 1 like I should have. bad me.

hehe jous going to be shopping with yugi for under wear and bras. i can't wait to see how it turns out. yugi doesn't know how to work with the new pulmbing. hehe i wonder if he'll figure out that he needs to sit down before he gets the bathroom too dirty. here's some cookies as a bribe to continue.