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for The XX Factor: x II *completed*

by Wicabeth

person Arainaina
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update when you can this is getting very good
person MinuetLove
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! The wedding was sweet, and the I loved the buzz cut image! Thanks!
person Arainaina
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very good please update soon
person Owaranaimono Aite
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. They all looked so adorable! Kree!!!!! Words can't describe how good it is. If I tried, I'd be here for an hour and leave a very long review, which might anger some people. Hehe... ^^() Can't wait to see what else they do. Yami's so sweet! *cuddles them both*
person leigh
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're being a little ham-fisted in your explainations, but otherwise, great chapter! ^-^
person SakuraNeko
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you, you marvelous person. Great chapter, and a very nice lemon too. ::winks::
person Sarah Costa
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a great lemon. So what happen next? Will Yugi be pregnant in the next chapter? Please update soon. Ja ne
person catti-dono
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAMI...you better not wait a whole month before updating...laughs...I was weary at first about reading this....but man its great....just like your other stories...kitty boys are my favorite....probably because Im a pervert...laughs....catti
person Arainaina
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update soon
person bluesun
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet that was awsome hope you continue soon