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for The XX Factor: x II *completed*

by Wicabeth

person Mysticmaiden
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow ita really one of the best fiction ive come across, i wonder if Yugi would have twins or a boy mot fictios dont have that twin bit it would be great to see Yugi to have a pair please
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story totally rocks just like the first one, *hee hee* Joey becoming a woman. That was a VERY Differcult thing to visulize since he's so masculine. Then having Yugi going though that interesting change too. God I don't even wanta know what its like being a man one day and a women the next, it would just be TOO Strange for me. Well anyway update soon and try to take it easy, life can get pretty stressfull at time's, specially with school, jobs, and everyday activites. And I'll be back to review. ^__^
person Muzaki
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fwee! Femme!Yugi would be kinda hot, actually... *kaff* Awesome fic so far! I wonder what Yugi and Yami are gonna name the baby. The wedding scene was so beautiful, and the lemons are good, which is saying something since I don't like het lemons. ^-^ Write on, please!
person Yoru Hana
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, sweet... Oh, question, if Alexia is Seto and Joey's kid, does that mean you're going to make Syrus Yugi and Yami's kid? What about Kane, Syrus' older brother, I think he's the same age as Alexia?

Yoru Hana
person Yoru Hana
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I just realized I used the new engilsh names (which I still managed to screw up) on refex, here are the original names.

Zane (not Kane) = Ryo Marufuji

Alexis (not Alexia) = Asuka Tenjouin

Syrus = Shou Marufuji
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD:nice try Wicabeth but no harming Maggie got that otherwise it will take even longer for her to get better see make it easier on yourself and let her heal naturally so Yugi's finally getting a child huh well congrats Yugi I'm sure everyone else will be giddy with happiness for you hehe and wicabeth update soon and keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
person Sarah Costa
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! YUGI IS PREGNANT!!! Will everything work well for Yugi and Yami? Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
person Owaranaimono Aite
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shot but who cares! So glad that you've updated! ^-^ Poor Yugi at first, now yay! Heheh. I'll be watching for the next update!
person SakuraNeko
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AIIIEEEEEEEEE! Lil Yugi/Yami baby is gonna be adorable! Can't wait man! Great chapter!
person Camille
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After this, you must do one with Ryo and Bakura. That should be a hoot!!