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by Wicabeth

person Des Yamimi
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should be a professional writter if you aren't already
Killer fic I love it!
person RayeMoon
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, dear. Long time, no see. It took me a while to make my way through this story and I've got to say... o_O. You have a creative mind, heh. I would never have thought of turning Yugi into a girl in order for (her) to get pregnant. I don't particularly enjoy cross-dressing/gender-switch myself, but I can't deny this wasn't a well-written, well-paced, well thought out story. Have to admit, I was disappointed a few of the lemons got only alluded to :-P. And I like how you have Yami state why he still likes Yugi when he is a she. I was wondering that myself and your answer makes sense. Whatever my particular likes, this was a great story and I'm glad for a happy ending. Hah, the twins are giving the 'twins' an exhausting time. Very cute. Jaa, dear. I hope to see you again soon.
person Sacuna
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It's given me so many creative ideas (Drawings not writings) that I don't know what to do with them all. Anyway, this story is a great inspiration and I enjoyed every second of it.
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy right now. MMMMM. p.s.I will be back just taking a dragonball z break...
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I don't normally like this type, but with your writing it sounds just fine! Can't wait for the next update!
person Sanny
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love love love it!
your story is absolutely beautiful!
I love your style and the plot is awesome!
I´m looking forward to your next chapter.

~ bye Sanny ~
person Kiki
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!! This is the best male pregnacy story i ever read!!! I love it. you did a great job!
P.S: it so cute that yugi had twins!
person Syn
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You! you! You WONDERFUL WRITER!!!! *squees and gives naked bishies for you* I loved it, read the whole thing over in one sitting, cried, laughed and bawled, then got terrified....but that's a different story...anyway...This was absolutely fantastic and thank you for emailing me to let me know that you had updated it.
person Spidy007
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *DANCERS* that was great! WELL DONE YUGI! NICE WORK! WHOO HOO! LOVED THE CHAPPIE! AND LOVED THE NAMES! YAY! update again SOON! BYE BYE
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lets just hope their daughter dosnt become as mischevious as Mana hehe but that is soooooooooooooooo CUTE Atemu and Mana mutou oooh thats PERFECT WOOHOO congrats Yami and Yugi congrats heh keep up the great work and update asap Wica gtg now JA NE