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for Bastard

by MarikIshtar77

person Cody Thomas
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of... Sadistic Much? Dear lord you made my Ryou lose all of his innocence! WAAAAAAAH! You said you wrote this when you had a bad day, it must have been the day from hell. You write very well, keep it up.
person DarkenedLight
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the coolest fic ever. FINALLY, RYOU HAS HIS FUCKIN' DAY!!! ME MADE BAKURA HIS BEGGING BITCH FOR A FEW MINUTES AND HE HAD SOME ICE CREAM FROM BEN & JERRY'S OR WHATEVER. GO RYOU FOR YOU FINALLY CLAIMED THE PERFECT REVENGE THAT OTHERS WISH THEY COULD ACHIEVE.
person Nightmare
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've out done yourself here. This was so fucking hot! This was so fucking great, don't stop the bloodshed! I love it. Keep it up
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou: THAT WAS SO AWESOME!
Bakura: ............
Ryou: So what do you say to that, love?
Bakura: I SWEAR TO RA NEVER TO PISS YOU OFF....or the other Ryou.
Ryou: *smiles and pats Bakura on the head* good boy.

Awesome torture!!!!!!
I *heart* torture.....especially Ryou x Bakura
person Nomalaz
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He finally snapped.
person Tanya
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! *shock* So who's the bastard here, Ryou or Bakura? Or maybe they shall share the title. Kick-ass ficlet, dude! *eyes filthy, injured Bakura* Hmm, he looks like he needs to be cleaned up ;) Heh heh!
person Switch
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was AWSOME! this is the type of thing that makes me happy to come home to after putting up with a whole bunch of bullshit. I thank you!
person Arias5
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus poo...Ryou gone mad? Did he take his pills?
Ouchies for Kura! *gives him Bandaids*
Well, angsty is teh topic for today!
I'm just gonna hide away now O_O
*~good one-shot!~*
person vc
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow go ryou!!!! that made my day :)
person zehlyah
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of fuck.

Gods, I don't even know what to say. This is exactly what I strive to attain within my own writings. You've just become all that I hope to accomplish on paper. Holy shit, Care. You've raised the bar with this one. Amazing.