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ABUSER! HOPE HONDA DIES!...-___-
Jeez reading about Otogi's abuse made my heart ached! It was so sad and dark! The one thing I liked about the chappie though was when he punched Yami!...no offense to the Yami fans but in fanfiction you can make any character from a jackass to a prissy! Well atleast Otogi and Jou are getting along fine...^_^ UPdate!

*ABSOLUTELY SEETHES* Malik SHOULD go kill Honda. *mutters angry curses..* Jeez, and the back story with Yami and Jou.. This is the first time I actually didn't mind seeing Yami get decked. Though, maybe Otogi should have at least gotten to kick Jou in the nuts once for good measure.

ouch! poor otogi... seriously he shoudl tell malik. i mean he loves him totally and i know it'll hurt but he knows malik won't do what honda did. and yeah i bet it felt good to punch yami like that. jou... i can understand why he did it but it still doesn't make it right. little by little otogi, don't rush it all at once okay?
nice story byt he way ^^

I heart this story to NO end! It's so emotional ,I was almost CRYING! Must be kinda hard, after all the humor and fluff and cavities and just sex in the rest of the universe, but I msut say, you're pulling it off perfectly. Much ebtter than my story is going...

Bah. Keep writing, I can't wait to see this ending. ^_^ And Atemu FINALLY got the punch he deserved! From otogi, no less! Whoo! --snugs her Otogi-kun plushies-- Malik WOULD kill him. No doubt. --snugs Malik plushies too-- Well... I'm going to make my plushies sit in dirty positions now. Heehee.. Hee.

Keep writing, I love all your stories SO, SO much! I should review more, but... I'm lazy. ^_^ And normally it's 'wake up. read. breakfast. sleep' so... yeah. But you KNOW I'll review this. ^_^

Love,
Miri-chan

Aww....;_; That was so sad yet sweet. Poor Otogi! *throws empty soda can at Honda's head* Bastard...>>;

And...*gasps* It surprised me that you thought you were writing too much. The thing that amazes me is that you -do- write so much, yet it doesn't seem at ALL rushed or written too fast...^__^ *wishes she had that kind of skill* x_X

Love your fics man! lol...oh the two allusions you made were to Miew Miew and to (i'm not sure about this one) Inuyasha? You callled the part dogs Inu's and Inuyasha is part dog demon. *shrug* could be wrong.^_^ Anyway, love your stories man! Keep um comming!!!

*growls!* Honda pisses me off so much! I want to go kick him in the nuts for being such a fucking asshole >.<

Oops, forgot to add that I also love reading all your stories. Don't think you're putting too many out. Trust me, if I didn't have work, I'd be whipping more out every few days XD

Whoppie! new story to read! ^^ It's great so far! and now we get to know how it started for Otogi and Honda!^_^ Can't wait for the next chappie!

I don't think you write too much! For one thing I look foreward to reading ur Updated stories! When I'm online I always check up on ur stories first cuz I know that there would be something new and I'm always content and happy when I see something UPdated of yours! ^_^ And if it annoys ppl well then to bad! Some of us can't wait to read ur stories!

So anyways UPdate as much as you want! oh and I can't wait for the one-shot of Raphael/Pegasus and Noa/Mokuba! ^_^ UPdate!

CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sorry i haven't reviewed in a while! But i love them all this was cute