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for Just for Your Love

by Kugatsu

person Velvetina
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I know that this has been finished quite a while but I literraly just got home from my hols and here I am this is the first thing I've done. Be proud of me cos I'm bloody exhuasted. I loved the ending espesh the Shadi/Rishid stuff aww I'm gonna have to do it *glomp* LOVE YOU!!!! Lol pathetically short review but gawd knows if your gonna see it since this story's finished and I'll leave a longer review on the others. LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am Regular, I think, anyway...I LOVE YOUR sequels and pequels THEY ROCK GO YOU!!!
person Miri-chan
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's self-insirtion! How dirty! I LOVED the ending! Laughed my ass off for so much of this chapter. Well, the good parts.

"Tell him he's the only guy I know who can fuck a cheerio and not break it!" Oh man... That was classic --whiping tears from her eyes-- And now Rishid and Shadi are a couple... But what about Isis? I mean, she's too nice to REALLY die... Wait. Serenity is a raging dyke... --coughs--

I'm so glad Malik and otogi are healed... I'll admit, I cracked up with the CSI thing. I'm an addict too. The best part is, Malik COULD pull it off. And, they got in some smut! Huzzah for smut! --dances about, despite the early hour of the morning--

I can only hope you keep more coming. Honda still has to get his, and now I'm looking forward to these one-shots. --grins--

Love you forEVER AND EVER!!!
The one and only,
Miri-chan
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
roflao omg that was so funny and great!! ooh ur good!! *giggles insanely* ur damn good!!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I liked reading over the funny parts again. Mmm.. And the lemon was so juicy. I'm so glad that things have worked out for Malik and Otogi.

And, poor Ishizu XD But that was still amusing *laughs* Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
person Ghost Dragon
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o Your a Doc now?! COOLIO, I love it bro it't rocks. Oh when are you going to do a Noa and Moki One shot? I hopw you may a new story with eveyone in it. T.T I love your storys so much they fucking rock man! I got to go, but if u like Beyblade Look up the story ' Tiger tiger' and 'Loving Tiger' by Me!
person BlacKat
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! The ending was pretty funny! XD Feel sorry for Ishizu though...HAHAHAHAhAhA! I was surprised that the doctors name was Schwarzwald...KEWL! lol...so Rashid and Shadi are seeing each other now? THE MORE KIMI GA IRU PAIRINGS THE BETTER! ^_^ WHOOPIE!
Thank you for the wonderful lemon of Malik/Otogi! Mmmmm...yum! ^_^ May this pairing live :of course the other pairings as well...: on despite the obsticles they face in life till the day they die! XD
And to the real Schwarzwald...^_^ I shall always be one of your loyal reader and R&R your stories!...unless I die some tragic death T_T then you'll have one loyal reviewer short...j/k! That probably won't happen until a few decades pass and by that time I'll have read ALL your stories! Kyukykyukyu!
:D Can't wait to review your next stories from Kimi ga Iru! ^^ Ja ne!
person mercynre
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, Yami got punched, but damn, Honda needs to get his ass laid out. Sniffles... why would anyone be so awful to Otogi? He's mostly a nice guy, other than dressing Jou up as a puppy that one time... The abuse seems realistic in the story, that's a hard thing to pull off sometimes.
person Saka
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow nice! I loved it. Great job! Actually it was awesome.
person Ghost dragon
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I would have kicked Yami some more, then gotta after the Boss, Honda..... I LOVE IT! I like the endding, 3 way!* Inmy head*