rate_review Reviews

I thought this was going to be based on the Kimi ga Iru universe and totally freaked when I continued reading it! XP Thank GOD it wasn't! I thought I would faint or something...mostly from the summer heat XP
I thought it was a pretty OK story although it was written pretty fast for my taste...^^ but it was an OK story in my book!

OMG OMG OMG WOW. Ok how is it that you manage to write so well, I'll admit I'm rather fond of the Yami/Raphy pairing sicne I watched the episode where Yami is helping Raphy climb the crumbling stairs and is like 'I wont let go' *glomp* LOVE YOU!!! Woot I'm all hyper despite the fact I have howwible blisters on my feet, but I am officially on my summer holidays now. Go me, I have nothing to do but laze about and read etc its great. Also the cuteness of Yugi and Seto was pretty awsome. *sigh* LOVE IT

Velvetina xx

Damn right I'll get my fic. I'm workng on yours, but progress is slow. Never done any serious... anything between the two main characters.

This was cute, so sweet it almost gave my cavities. And funny, too. Though... Yami and Raph would be damn hot, and you know Varon and Amelda were totally fucking on the side anyways. Or maybe not.

I like the PoV thing, you kept it strangly in charcter, all things considered.

Write more!

Love,
Miri

Oh my gosh... that was so romantic, very well written. Atem and Raphael have got to be my least favorite characters on the show, but you really made them come alive for me!!! I even stared at the monitor and made the awwww... face.