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Ohh things are getting intense! I hope you update soon^^

What a nice chapter!!

I hope sooner or later Joey will forget Ryou!!
He can't think of Ryou for his entire life!!

I hope everything will get better!!

Kimikiumi

Oh my gosh. your fic is great I loves it plz write more as soon as you can.

I loved this chapter! Poor Kaiba, but I'm glad Jou was there for him. And Kaiba's fantasy...phew. ;D I hope Seto does end up with the same happy life that Mokuba is on his way to achieving. And wow.. a motorcycle ride with Jou? That sounds great! Hehe.
At first, when I read that the gate was open, I thought, "Oh no! Ryou left the gate open and somebody robbed/tore his place up!!" But only Ryou being there is better... I guess. XD Unless Malik's tearing up his stuff, anyway. I'm curious to see what sparks will fly between them all, especially when they see Seto is there! Will Seto pretend that he's *with* Jou, to make them jealous (I hope so.. that might be interesting ;)? And what will happen in the restaurant?
Looking forward to your next update!

Ahh, confrontation, I like it! Can't wait to see how this turns out.

.....*jumps up and down* YAY!!!!! ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!!!^^..........wow...........it seems as if i've been waiting forver for this update! *sighs in mock-exasperation*..........^^ hehehe!^^ mmmmm, i love the thought of jou and seto on that bike together *eyes get glassy as she starts to think about it*........yummy^^..........*real sigh* school's starting again on monday, and it'll be my sophomore year, so i'm sorry if my updates seem to come late ^.~, i'm told that colleges only really look at sophomore and junior year, so no slacking for me!............although, reading your story will definatly be a welcome treat for getting my homework done*grins*.......well, that was an extremely great chapter, and i just hope that jou doesn't get too traumatized when (becuase he is gonna see him, ne?) he sees malik..........or ryou.......^^; is jou going to see ryou and him and then pretend that seto is his boyfriend so that he can get back at ryou?...........oh well^^...........i love you and your story *grin*...........sooooooo........keep up the good work and here are some jolly ranchers *holds out a bag of the candy/all the grape ones are taken out*...........hehehe, sorry.........i love grape jolly ranchers (of course, i'm like the only one that i know who like them^^;)............*hugs* Ja ne and love as thou wilt!

wahh i love this storry. Kaiba is so... mhhh. Thanks soooooooo much for this

I love this fanfic! I was waiting for Jou and Seto to meet again and, thanks to Shizuka, they did! I was surprised when Seto smiled at Shizuka. Twice! And then he and Jou get a drink. I'm so happy that they're getting along. Why? Why did you leave it at a cliff hanger? I can't wait to read what Jou says. Update soon, okay?

I'm really glad Seto didn't make a scene. And I hope that's truly happy for them.. eventually. It's understandable though, especially if Mokuba let Jou know first, but he *is* her brother. Maybe Seto's bitter? XD
And talk about awkward at the bar. I'm glad you brought Honda into this! I never thought about it before, but I can see him being a cop. I'm curious to see what happens with the subplot of the girl and her father.
Looking forward to your next update.

That was a fantastic way to end the chapter, OMG I can't wait to read the next one! Great job.