rate_review Reviews

It has been so long since I visited AFF!!! So glad I came back and ran across your story!!! I absolutely loved it!!! From beginning to end!! I loved seeing the Kaiba brothers fighting and on not speaking to each other when it came to Mokuba's engagement! I really loved how you were able to keep Kaiba to character and to see him with a phyc to discuss his issues. Jou and Kaiba's relationship, them becoming parents and crying tears from Katsuya being in a coma I loved it all!!! I would have loved to see it end with Shizuka being pregnant but it ending with Katsuya taking Kaiba was just as good!!! Thank you!!!

Beautiful story. :3 The ending with the wedding might be a tad bit cheesy, but so what, I don't care. :D After the drama they need their happy ending. <3

I have read many a story involving Jou and Seto, both here and on other websites, and I must say that yours is amongst the best of the best. Your storyline is believable, the way you write the characters makes them living and breathing entities that leap off the page...you feel their joy and heartache, and come to care for them and wish them well. This is what a great writer does and I consider you to be one. I look forward to your next story!

MMmm Jamesons is an excellent whiskey. i had some 12-year brought back from ireland.... oh my god. : D

Wow, it's taken me all day to read this story, and I mean ~all~ day. It's about 1 am where I am and I'm just finishing it. You made me laugh, smile, cry and some other things that... well... you get the idea *hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge*. This was totally amazing. Seto and Katsuya totally belong together and I liked the tat idea for Katsuya. ^^ I also liked how he worked as a chef. I might just have to borrow that idea from you! Haha. This is totally amazing and I ~love~ you for writing it!

~Linn~

Totally loved this story. You are such a great writer. This story had depth, the characters were well fleshed out - I was engrossed in their world. You make them so real, well-rounded, and we readers get to see their personality, their strentghs and weaknesses. You are all that. Thanks for the great read.

Overall, I really loved the fic. Though I felt Kaiba and Joey were possibly mildly ooc, you made up a great story and a wonderful plot. It was interesting to read a play on Kaiba that he was raped and had all sorts of 'problems' that he never showed. Thought I was equally curious that if Mokuba and Serenity get married, would that make their getting together be considered incest?

There's one part of the story I actually didn't like that much, that you probably had your other readers rave on how great it was.....and that was the whole 'Joey in an accident' thing. Though it was done well, I was disappointed over the typical cliche that the only way you could have them make up and get back together was to have Joey shot. I was more hoping to see them have a conflict and be able to make it on their own without some horrendous threat putting someone's life in danger to do it. But during that event, I also liked the touching part where Kaiba is finally able to talk to his brother on things that happened to him in the past. And Kaiba being Kaiba......I honestly believed if it wasn't for something terrible happening, Kaiba would have never been able to open up to Mokuba in that way. So, despite the disappointment in the love quarrel, I guess the family bonding thing helped make up for it. ;)

Hope to see your work again, sometime.

Clarity

it was a good ending though it looked a bit too hurried up but still good. The lemon was well... it was good, well kind of, because like i said too hurried up but congratiolations for your story glad you have finished it cause it was really good hope to read others.

wow...you are such an amazing writer. With you I was there with Jou and Kaiba for all the highs and lows...it was pure awesomeness. I'm sad to see this story end, but I'm glad that I had a chance to read it and for that I thank you.

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