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that...kicked..ASS!!! I was reading the beginning an I was like, that is SO Bakura, you don't even understand, this story ROCKED!!!!!!! question, it was Yami and Marik he was dancin with right? But you've got to have a Yamishipping sequel, i am beggind you!

Aw. He did say 'I'll be back, bitches'. And yet, he never went back. >3. Poor little men.

Fantastic, and well-written? I'm quite lazy, reason being why I didn't takle the time to type a long review. My pizza's on the way! Wheeee!

...Chicken sucks.

Funny. When I thought of Ryuuji, I always imagined.. a bear. o_o Wait. No. Um. Uhm... a Fox! That's it. A fox. x3. Not a BEAR. Haha.

-Prince of Egypt songs stuck in head.- e-e

I luffed it. I never took my eyes from the screen. >:3. That's how gewd it was?!

~Daaku.

*dances wildly in club*

Wow... not how I imagined it, but still great! :D Didn't realise Bakura thought Ryou was a bit dopey... I like the way Ryou got into the whole modelling this, coz to me it seems like he would only have ever done it for someone else :)

I loved it! It was sultry and I hope you'll make it more than a one-shot!

lovely one-shot... i'm glad that you got marik and yami into the fic too! :D lovely descriptions of outfits... someone needs to draw them!

Hi :)

*purrs* oooh, well written - you did a wonderful job of creating the sensuality of the scene...*blushes & winks* lol Just one spot where you had 'your' instead of 'you're'....oops.
Hmm...I can't help but think..this has possibilities, oh yes it does... like what happens with Otogi and Bakura after this, if anything for that matter....and what did Yami and Marik do after they lost Bakura? (poor bishies...) If you're inclined to continue or write more accompanying one-shots, I'd love reading them *hint hint*
Random thought for the day: "the notorious 'out'"? lol! Dunno why, but that just amused me to no end - cause 'out' really is a popular place to go, huh? ;):P
Until next time, and as always, keep writing! Good job!
-K.M.

I knew I shouldn't have read this before I had to go out! *pants...*

That was just.. pure sex *purrs*

Wow. That was pretty hot and I liked the way he totally dissed yami and marik. Loved it!

YES! Otogi won! I loved it! Very sensual, I loved the descriptions of the clothing. Yes, great fic and if you are compelled to do more side stories (like what Yami and Malik did after Bakura ditched them) I'll be happy to read and review. Keep with updates! Thanks for the Bakura/Otogi sexiness