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YES YES YES YESYESYESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! I mean...please make a story featuring Bakura and otogi. Thanks *eye twitches crazily*

Dang! That was hot. Personally, I'd love to see more of this fic. Bakura is sex on a stick. Maybe little Otogi could catch the attention of another and we could see possessive Bakura in action... I thought your descriptions were colorful and I liked the addition of Yami and Marik. It was sweet, too, that Bakura loved his younger brother. Usually he's portrayed as hating Ryou or hurting him. This was nicely done. Thank you for posting it.

Oh my gosh, you're ALIVE!!! Wait, tell me you're alive... *pokes* i just made an account so I could post this! :P

You ARE finishing EaN, RIGHT?!? :P I was considering bugging you via email the other day (or doing wildly hypnotic dancing to force you to update) but I guess this is just as good...

Looking forward to an update?

wow... that so like bakura... it was really good

lol, yes, definately, but I want MORE SETO/RYOU!!! *sniffles*

From gantaeno, who is shamefully not drawnig fanart, because she has lost all inspiration :P And can't use photoshop for love nor money :D

Hi!

*perks up at the sound of more writing from Kanzia* Well, I'm always up for more stories...*looks pointedly at last review* Do whatever you like! :) Hope the wording comes to you soon...sometimes that's the hardest part *sigh*

Always looking forward to the next bit!
-K.M.
PS You do too have talent! *is being stubborn* ;P

A continuation of this? *screams with glee* That would be so utterly perfect, I'd love it! Like I said, great writing style, some of my favorite pairings (yamishipping, diceshipping) and I swear, if I could draw, I'd send you fanart. XD

*cheers for the idea of more*

*gasps* you can't just end it there...*shakes her fists at you*. That was all sorts of yummy...I can so see Bakura doing the whole clubbing scene, the fact that he's well known adds to the beliviability.

WOW.
I mean really wow. Wonderful job creating a setting and then the smut was truly smokin! What a cool night club and damn did you make bakura sound hot. Neat outfights, a "dangerous fae" eh? you really have a way with words. love the story and if there happens to be more that would be absolutely marvelous! (i am so gonna go re read now! I also am a fan of everywhere nowhere so i was super excited to read something new that you had written.(there got a review and no update threat necessary:))

Wow, I really loved this! Normally I'm very picky about stories, but this was truly excellent. You have a beautifully descriptive style and the way in which you phrased things was just fantastic.

The part about:

"If Bakura was walking sex, then this boy was liquid sex, dancing on the small platform as though caught in the current of the music and flowing with it. Bakura didn't know what he had, but he wanted to bottle it and take it home with him none the less. "

Caught my eye especially, seeing as how it honestly did describe Otogi perfectly.

Which leads to my only minor quibbles:

Bakura is not an albino. Pale yes, but not albino. Albino is an actual medical condition.

It's Otogi, not Otoogi. ^_~

And 'whitenette' was a bit of a weird way to describe someone...

Apart from those, it really was a great read and I'm bookmarking it right now. XD