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for Doom and Demise

by YamiMisao

person Luna
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!! i really like it and desperate waiting for the next chapter, please review *.*
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those three are so hott when they are together
person Aniymeii
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
exilent story! ' please update' as fast as you can!
person Satra
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I SO love this story!! Please, PLEASE update SOON!!
person LadyGrey
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute story. There are some small parts where I think you're pulling them too far out of character, but it doesn't hurt your story. Hope you update soon, and my offer of beta-ing is still open, just to catch the couple of typos I've found. Email me. Ja ne! ~LG
person Sakura-Laurel
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to update this soon! It's awesome! Though, Yami sounds a bit geeky... Ah well, can't be helped....
person Shadow Mistress or Dark Magician Girl Hikaru (on ff.net)
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rotflmao* XDXDXD I luv this story, it's so freakin hilarious!!! Especially the ch called "Janitor's Closet" Had me cracking up almost all the way through. About time Yami got together with them too, love how it's in his pov, it's proves to be quite interesting. Definitely can't wait for more of this, it's addictive. lol. Til the next ch. ^_~
person Lady Laran
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I haven't laughed so hard in so long! Please update soon. I love that you're showing it from Yami's POV. You know what would be fun? A companion peice on how the hikaris got together. Update soon!!!
person the-girl-who-is-obsessed-with-bakura
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i almost laught my ass off with this fic!! it's really good!
please don't forget to update soon!
keep up the god work^__^
person KENZ
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cackles evily*
oh more more pelase this is good ^.^