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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0 wow a new chappie!!!! XD and Schwarzwald is claiming that they're back!!!!!! >w< YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol nice to see that your still alive and writing really it'as been a long time since I've seen any Updates on the stories =) but anyways great chappie >.> and yea' everyones getting closer but the one I mostly want to see and have progress on is Ryou and Dartz ^^ Well yea' anyways UPdate when yea' can ^^
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowo! you're story is so cool! i love it so much! please please please continue!!! Are Jou and Varon ever gettning together for real? Will they have puppies? Can the Neko's have kittens? Please dont give up on this!!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ YAY! New chappie!
lol yea its been awhile since you've last UPdated T_T i was sad for not reading anything new from yea' but now i am =3 So anyways great chappie and all 0.- is it alright if you show more Dartz/Ryou, Jou/Varon, and Amelda/Yami to see where they stand and all and of course don't foget Seto/Bakure ^^ there others are doing cool i guess but then it looks like Yami and Yugi aren't doing so well since Grandpa left oooo i see a break up lol...and Noa has powers!!!!!!! MIND READING!!!! COOOLLLLL! wonder what'll happen to him though...>.> MORE SMUTTYness please and cuddles Mcdonalds lol ^^ UPdate when yea' can!
lol yea its been awhile since you've last UPdated T_T i was sad for not reading anything new from yea' but now i am =3 So anyways great chappie and all 0.- is it alright if you show more Dartz/Ryou, Jou/Varon, and Amelda/Yami to see where they stand and all and of course don't foget Seto/Bakure ^^ there others are doing cool i guess but then it looks like Yami and Yugi aren't doing so well since Grandpa left oooo i see a break up lol...and Noa has powers!!!!!!! MIND READING!!!! COOOLLLLL! wonder what'll happen to him though...>.> MORE SMUTTYness please and cuddles Mcdonalds lol ^^ UPdate when yea' can!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sound like you've been a bit hectic at the moment. *huggle* That sucks and I totally understand that your schoolwork etc comes first and any other obligations and so totally never feel pressured to try to write when you have other things on you mind. Not only will that make you worry about what you ought to be doing but it will reflect on your work. You should always know that those of us who know and love you work will be willing to wait for you to post firstly because we want the best from you (in the best way) and also I like to think a lot of you and your personality shines through in your writing and we all want to know that you are happy etc.
That being said I loved this chappie. I know that you mentioned that you had issues with it and - i mean this in the best possible way- it showed a bit. I don't know how to describe it but I just felt that some places felt a tad forced. I'm not dissing the chapter or anything because as i've already mentioned I thought it was brillent, it just lacked a bit of the usual flow...gah I hope I haven't made you mad at me *worried look* anyway I though that there were some good plot advancements coming through here which may be the key to you getting a bit more inspiration. For example in this chappie we saw some of Mariks feelings/lust for Yugi starting to come through and Yugi hvae the begginings of a crush on Marik which means you can move them along a bit more, maybe a lustful encounter is whats needed to make Yugi slightly mroe mature...or who knows maybe it'd make the little chibi go in the other direction? Also there was the great moment where Malik ran out on Isizu and Rishid etc which I think opens a lot of pathways for you to go down for example how will his family react if he tries to go home, how is marik going to react? There are more things but they are a few of the issues that are on my mind after immediat;y after reading the chapter.
Anyway I hope that you are ok. I'd like to say that I'm here for you if you just need to vent because at the momoent I can kinda relate to that but we all know thats a tad difficult. However if you ever chat about whats bothering you during the end or start of your chappies know that I'll try and answer and be supportive in my reviews...ah that sounds kinda cheesy but you know what I mean...I hope lol
Velvetina xx
That being said I loved this chappie. I know that you mentioned that you had issues with it and - i mean this in the best possible way- it showed a bit. I don't know how to describe it but I just felt that some places felt a tad forced. I'm not dissing the chapter or anything because as i've already mentioned I thought it was brillent, it just lacked a bit of the usual flow...gah I hope I haven't made you mad at me *worried look* anyway I though that there were some good plot advancements coming through here which may be the key to you getting a bit more inspiration. For example in this chappie we saw some of Mariks feelings/lust for Yugi starting to come through and Yugi hvae the begginings of a crush on Marik which means you can move them along a bit more, maybe a lustful encounter is whats needed to make Yugi slightly mroe mature...or who knows maybe it'd make the little chibi go in the other direction? Also there was the great moment where Malik ran out on Isizu and Rishid etc which I think opens a lot of pathways for you to go down for example how will his family react if he tries to go home, how is marik going to react? There are more things but they are a few of the issues that are on my mind after immediat;y after reading the chapter.
Anyway I hope that you are ok. I'd like to say that I'm here for you if you just need to vent because at the momoent I can kinda relate to that but we all know thats a tad difficult. However if you ever chat about whats bothering you during the end or start of your chappies know that I'll try and answer and be supportive in my reviews...ah that sounds kinda cheesy but you know what I mean...I hope lol
Velvetina xx
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cuddles Yugi to bits* Poor little guy! Marik is so sweet to him though, I'm glad.
And Jou and Varon.. I wonder how things are going to work out with them...
.. Is Jou carrying puppies? =3
And Jou and Varon.. I wonder how things are going to work out with them...
.. Is Jou carrying puppies? =3
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, stupid internet. Please ignore I double posted.. >.< And I forgot I already asked once about Jou and the puppies.. I fail. I should go to bed now.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little disgruntled that ch22 didn't have any ryou or bakura but it's okay. i agreee yami is an ass hole and ishizu was just over reacting. well can't wait forthe next installment
Demon
Demon
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, it does make me happy to see updates from this. I do enjoy it very much.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cuddles all the poor little sad kitties ;.;
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww I love it! but BAD YAMI! How dare he do that to Yugi. I'm so rooting for Marik all the way! however Bakura and Ryou were totally adorable together possibly my fave part. And yes Dartz is kind of mean but I have a warm cuddely spot hidden away for him all the same lol. I know this review ain't up to my normal standard....sowwie. Untill next time LOVE IT!
Velvetina xxx
Velvetina xxx